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Date: 8/26/2003 7:01:00 PM
From Authorid: 13969
That's really impressive.  |
Date: 8/26/2003 7:05:00 PM
From Authorid: 42568
Whoa Snookums, that rocks... I can relate to this in an odd way and I won't even try to explain but I would like to say, that this is well written...   |
Date: 8/26/2003 7:08:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 53427
Bethann, you know I don't write poetry. This is only my second attempt. But I seem to write best when I'm upset and I am pretty ticked off at the moment. Thanks both of you for your comments.  |
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Date: 8/26/2003 7:11:00 PM
From Authorid: 42568
Really? Wow. Did you post the other one? I'd like to read it. That's when I write best too Kelly. Your emotions are easily read when they're at a peak... |
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Date: 8/26/2003 7:12:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 53427
Yeah I posted it. Its a short one. I can't think of the name. I'll go check. |
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Date: 8/26/2003 7:14:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 53427
http://www.unsolvedmysteries.com/usm313029.html |
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Date: 8/26/2003 7:19:00 PM
From Authorid: 42568
I already read it and commented! LOL. I feel bad for missing it, you should of told me sooner! |
Date: 8/26/2003 8:08:00 PM
From Authorid: 56840
Wow, these words are so very true.. It just keeps adding up, doesn't it.. Keep writing..  |
Date: 8/26/2003 8:11:00 PM
From Authorid: 57222
lol well then it's good you're mad! lol it was good, good job  |
Date: 8/26/2003 11:12:00 PM
From Authorid: 56359
Wow Snookums, this was really good! You put a lot of emotion, and heart into it. Writing your feelings out in a poem or a story really helps. Excellent job, and I hope to see more writing from you soon.-screen_writer-  |
Date: 8/27/2003 6:55:00 AM
From Authorid: 59418
very very good poem - and i think many people have experienced something like this so they can relate! *hugs*  |
Date: 8/29/2003 1:09:00 PM
From Authorid: 56489
Man I thought you were writing about a few of my ex's there for a second, LOL. Great poetry, no atempt you accomplished. Keep writing!  |
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Date: 8/29/2003 1:48:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 53427
Thanks so much everybody. I really appreciate your kind words and encouragement. |
Date: 8/30/2003 6:53:00 PM
From Authorid: 57232
Oh and I liked it so much I bookmarked it!  |
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Date: 8/30/2003 6:53:00 PM
From Authorid: 57232
WOW!!!!!!!!! Seriously. Maybe his crap will end up to a lucrative career for you. Keep note of all his stuff in the pile you know and write a screenplay for a movie, and it'll all be him of course, but name the character Bob or something, and make all this money off of it, and he'll be a memory, a glimpse in a car window as you back away! |
Date: 9/17/2003 8:10:00 PM
From Authorid: 35160
oh wow, that was gr8. i have totally been there b4, it sucks. big huggs sweety, shay  |
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Date: 12/10/2012 10:33:00 PM
From Authorid: 6798
For a freshie at poetry, this is a good angsty piece whenever one gets angry, pen a poem to induce peace.  |
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Date: 12/10/2012 10:49:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 53427
Shasel, thank you for replying. I like your little ditty! And yes, it's a very good way to get your feelings out when life gets overwhelming. |
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Date: 12/11/2012 12:53:00 AM
From Authorid: 6798
You're most welcome Kelly give it a cool melody |
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