Date: 8/15/2003 8:20:00 AM
From Authorid: 56630
Thats a sad yet beautiful poem Ownie...keep up the great work.HUGZ {CAVEMAN}  |
Date: 8/15/2003 12:44:00 PM
From Authorid: 16131
Very good Heather .... I am glad I came over to see some of your work .... I will eventually read all of your posts but , I really like this one so far and have book marked it . I know the feelings you conveyed in this one all too well but , I have learned one very important thing from grave digging .... Graves are meant for memories to be put to rest not people . Took me 27 years to learn that and if you think about it , you will know it too ....  |
Date: 8/15/2003 12:48:00 PM
From Authorid: 59266
The darkness, emotion,and hurt this poem conveys is profound. The metaphorical aspect of this poem is creative unique and adds a dark aspect metaphorically to the sadness conveyed. EXCELLENT WORK. My kind of writing...   |
Date: 8/15/2003 7:21:00 PM
From Authorid: 56359
Heather I can relate to your work so much. This was so sad, and yet written so well. I wouldn't expect anything less then spectacular when it comes to your work. Thank you and write on.-screen_writer-  |
Date: 8/16/2003 6:57:00 AM
From Authorid: 42522
I like it! Very nice!  |
Date: 10/15/2003 5:17:00 PM
From Authorid: 8024
wow ... this is good one been flippin through your stuff ... sounds quite painful ... can relate ... thanks ...c  |
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