A castle in the sand
nought but death at hand
Still here I stand alone
Amid sun bleached bones
Long did I lead the fight
Well into the black of night
My sword held high,
Flashing through the sky.
The night was lit by dragons' flame
To victory we laid claim
By dawn's early light.
Won was the fight!
Still here I stand
with nought but death at hand.
I need some suggestions. Two more lines, and I'll consider it complete. Any suggestions would be most helpful, as I currently have some SERIOUS writer's block. This is, BTW, only my SECOND poem in my LIFETIME. You can join Unsolved Mysteries and post your own mysteries or
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