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Illusion......by: fantasy/reality

  Author:  57105  Category:(Poetry) Created:(8/3/2003 10:26:00 PM)
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This is definetly, by far..the longest poem I have ever written. I really dont know what to say..this poem just poured out of me. Im not sure what to think..

I lay back
Flat on the floor
I scream out to heaven
But no sound goes out
I try to stand
I try to crawl
To someplace where there may be light
Someplace where the sound comes out
Where the screams that tear out of me
Can be noticed, be recognized
I roll onto my side
Dry tears rolling down my cheeks
And soak the floor in an illusion
A sharp pain jolts through
Ripping through, tearing through my bleeding soul
No more questions to be asked
The answers never came
And now it is too late
Its too late for me
I'm sorry
Please forgive me for these sins I've drowned in
Crystal prism light glimmers
Oh how beautiful the colours are
So bright, so brilliant
And a thousand voices penetrate me
Images and sounds of what I could have been
People I could have met
And the love I never felt
The melody so hauntingly divine
But no..
None of this could be real
Bring me back to reality
Bring me back to life
Isn't someone missing me?
No, no..
The doubt rings in my ears
I scream but still no noise
The brilliant lights have gone away
Now I'm back down on the floor
Crying out with all my might
Then falling limp in no one's arms
And my soul breathes its last breath
Tastes its last tear
And it shatters into crystal fragments
Much like the crystal prism from before
But no, this is not the same
No light shines from these now
Darkened, dulled, black obsidian pieces
Broken along with all of my hope
Now my dreams bleed through me
My dreams..
My only reality


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Date: 8/3/2003 11:32:00 PM  From Authorid: 37150    I really enjoyed the length of this poem cuz that means i got 2 read more of what u wrote hehehhe...but the words and flow of this are amazing but this poem is one of the most somber i've read of urs. It's beautifully written in it's meloncholy. Thanks 4 sharing it! *hugs*  
Date: 8/4/2003 5:01:00 AM  From Authorid: 13824    I doubt your worried about the length of the poem, but I am still going to say it. Don't worry about the length of the poem. You know what you have a great way of leading words to words, it's just cool. How long have you been writing? I can't do that unless I am really depressed, and I have been writing since I was young. Oh well, this poem is on of your best poems. I really can't compare it to any of your poems. All of your poems are awesome. I like the ending. take care  
Date: 8/4/2003 7:13:00 AM  From Authorid: 62222    I am also glad this was longer because I got to read more. But I am sometimes greedy like that! Thank you for posting it. <regretfulhalo>  
Date: 8/4/2003 8:49:00 AM  From Authorid: 55386    This was so good!!!! This had so much detail and emotion put into it. It might have been long, but that's what made it even better. Some poets only make tiny ones, not caring about detail, or how it looks. But this, the longness just made it better with all the detail. The emotions were raw, and I liked that a lot also. Gosh, a lot of your poems remind me of songs from Evanescence, like, this one reminded me of "Bring Me to Life". Thank you for posting this wonderful, emotional poem. Great job and keep writing!!!  
Date: 8/4/2003 10:10:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 57105    Thank you all very much..I'm glad the length didn't bother you! -fantasy/reality  

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