Date: 7/22/2003 4:15:00 PM
From Authorid: 27046
Nice, you summed up a lot in a few short words...  |
Date: 7/22/2003 4:30:00 PM
From Authorid: 56840
Amazingly complete.. I think I needed this.. Keep writing, this is excellent.   |
Date: 7/22/2003 4:52:00 PM
From Authorid: 21435
Well done, Appirition. Words can cut soooo deep. Thanks and Write on  |
Date: 7/22/2003 8:06:00 PM
From Authorid: 10915
Wow Appy. This is a wonderful and very powerful poem. Like Az said, you summed up a powerful messasge in very few words.  |
Date: 7/22/2003 8:07:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 15677
Thanks az, girlie , lady blaze an kronk )  |
Date: 7/22/2003 8:18:00 PM
From Authorid: 13636
I've felt this way many days.....it sucks, but it's possible to get past it.  |
Date: 7/22/2003 8:49:00 PM
From Authorid: 15400
Good poem Appirition! It reminds me of my current events with my boyfriend. Thanks for sharing.  |
Date: 7/25/2003 5:35:00 AM
From Authorid: 38095
How true. As the others said, you got a lot of feeling for just a few words... Nice poem  |
Date: 12/6/2003 9:51:00 AM
From Authorid: 57768
great poem! keep on writing!  |
Date: 12/10/2003 5:49:00 AM
From Authorid: 8024
ohhh dear his is deeply sad .. I have a few good ideas about why she goes on livin excellent poem regaurdless ... 28 hugs ...  |
Date: 2/13/2004 7:55:00 AM
From Authorid: 62132
Wow, I know how this is. Thank you for sharing! I loved it!  |
Date: 7/11/2004 5:02:00 PM
From Authorid: 56913
even tho I might see it as too short.. you can feel the depth of her agony.. I love this piece.. *bookmarks*  |
Date: 12/5/2005 5:23:00 AM
From Authorid: 11341
OMG Appi *hugs* So sad  Very well written, but I wish you never had to write it.  |
