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| Date: 7/20/2003 8:29:00 PM From Authorid: 61950 Don't you wish we could all hold on to our innocence? Everything would be much easier, but your mapped out skin reminds you of bad times....but in those times you grew. Anyway...I'm gonna stop before I go off on some random tangent like always. Marvelous job on the writing and by the way...it kind of sounds like the Division Bell....I like that. Hope to see you soon, baby, but until then I Love You!!! *STEPH* |
Date: 7/22/2003 5:58:00 PM
From Authorid: 56840
Marvelous images.. Your words lend so much richness.. This unnerved me a little, as I think it's supposed to do! Hehe.  Keep writing..  |
Date: 7/24/2003 7:55:00 PM
From Authorid: 36757
that is some really good imagery. my english teacher hounded us for not understanding poe's imagery... lol. your poem is really good though. keep it up  |
Date: 7/25/2003 6:48:00 PM
From Authorid: 13897
i never understood such anger. glaring to the world- the hate just seething from their eyes. after the sadness had passed, all there left was rage. wonderful poem.. brought back memories.. and i love writing that makes me feel. even emotions that aren't so pleasant. the emotion is what is important.  |
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43274 Category:(Poetry) Created:(7/20/2003 8:14:00 PM)