Go to Unsolved Mystery Publications Main Index Go to Free account page
Go to frequently asked mystery questions Go to Unsolved Mystery Publications Main Index
Welcome: to Unsolved Mysteries 1 2 3
 
 New Mystery StoryNew Unsolved Mystery UserLogon to Unsolved MysteriesRead Random Mystery StoryChat on Unsolved MysteriesMystery Coffee housePsychic Advice on Unsolved MysteriesGeneral Mysterious AdviceSerious Mysterious AdviceReplies Wanted on these mystery stories
 




Show Stories by
Newest
Recently Updated
Wanting Replies
Recently Replied to
Discussions&Questions
Site Suggestions
Highest Rated
Most Rated
General Advice

Ancient Beliefs
Angels, God, Spiritual
Animals&Pets
Comedy
Conspiracy Theories
Debates
Dreams
Dream Interpretation
Embarrassing Moments
Entertainment
ESP
General Interest
Ghosts/Apparitions
Hauntings
History
Horror
Household tips
Human Interest
Humor / Jokes
In Recognition of
Lost Friends/Family
Missing Persons
Music
Mysterious Happenings
Mysterious Sounds
Near Death Experience
Ouija Mysteries
Out of Body Experience
Party Line
Philosophy
Poetry
Prayers
Predictions
Psychic Advice
Quotes
Religious / Religions
Reviews
Riddles
Science
Sci-fi
Serious Advice
Strictly Fiction
Unsolved Crimes
UFOs
Urban Legends
USM Events and People
USM Games
In Memory of
Self Help
Search Stories:


Stories By AuthorId:


Google
Web Site   

Bookmark and Share



Undoing, Part 4: The Morning

  Author:  43592  Category:(Fiction) Created:(7/15/2003 5:58:00 PM)
This post has been Viewed (1051 times)

The home-made sundial in Ben's room said 12:37. "Come on, come on. Where are they. It's been months. Why don't they respond?" he thought. A knock came at his door. He ran through his hallways to his front door. He opened it anxiously, but he only saw the messanger. "Sorry, sir," he said,"no response. I tried everything. Pigeons, letters, yelling, even breaking and entering. But I can't find anything." "It's ok," Ben told him in a comforting voice,"don't worry about it anymore. I'll take matters into my own hands."

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Ryan lifted his pounding head off the carpet. He looked at his watch, his old mechanical watch. He squinted and starred to make out the time, and date. Then he shot up as quick as a bullet. "April 15th! 2004! JEEEEEEEEN!!!! JEEEEEEEEEEEEEENNN!!!!" "What?" Jen asked in a quiet aching tone, holding her forehead. "It's April 15! We've been unconcious. Oh God, Paul, Jim, Pat, Gary, and all those guests. Where are they?!" "Here," said a voice,"I'm here." It was Paul, and beside was Jim. "What happened?" Jim asked. Ryan gazed into the abyss towards them for a long while. He eventually shook his head saying,"I don't know. And I don't want to."

He looked about the room, the balcony was at the same level as the living room. The TV was cracked, laying on the floor. The lights had been replaced by torches and candles and lanterns. their windows were crudely cut holes in the wall. Their doors had no knobs and no glass or locks. their tables and chairs were wooden and simple, not to mention uncomfortable. Their house was made mostly of cool gray stone now. Their cars whithered to dust. Ryan looked towards the east and pondered.

Just then, piece of a 2 x 4 came hurling through their windowish thing. A note was attached. It read.... "Come to the house of Ben Jarins. There you will find lodgings, food, water, a familiar face, and most of all, answers. Arrive tomorrow at noon. Be precise, I'll be waiting."

Ryan walked to Jen and starred into her eyes. "Read this." He said. "What. No Ryan. It's now safe. We don't know what happened or what's out there now. We couldn't make it to Ben's with no food or water. I don't want to do this." She said. "Me neither, but we don;t have much choice."

You can join Unsolved Mysteries and post your own mysteries or
interesting stories for the world to read and respond to Click here

Scroll all the way down to read replies.

Show all stories by   Author:  43592 ( Click here )

Halloween is Right around the corner.. .







 
Replies:      
Date: 7/15/2003 7:58:00 PM  From Authorid: 56840    Hmm, it's interesting, all right! Please continue!  
Date: 7/15/2003 9:15:00 PM  From Authorid: 58084    Come on Man keep going  
Date: 7/16/2003 4:17:00 PM  From Authorid: 11176    very interesting   

Find great Easter stories on Angels Feather
Information Privacy policy and Copyrights

Renasoft is the proud sponsor of the Unsolved Mystery Publications website.
See: www.rensoft.com Personal Site server, Power to build Personal Web Sites and Personal Web Pages
All stories are copyright protected and may not be reproduced in any form, except by specific written authorization

Pages:1252 634 1543 759 1580 405 363 693 190 137 483 1184 1362 289 625 966 190 78 37 396 1308 504 618 1473 1213 1375 1445 270 1392 333 95 553 1044 274 773 608 1410 1182 435 1268 893 345 913 1535 185 984 642 1008 1395 480 1182 1103 1166 1396 1345 284 210 501 1320 885 425 599 797 336 823 352 694 385 258 502 479 727 546 901 696 1026 390 1135 1093 145 912 1545 742 561 368 1456 169 403 482 1001