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A New Beginning~Pt 1 ~Wild Child~

  Author:  53549  Category:(Fiction) Created:(6/16/2003 12:43:00 PM)
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The wail of sirens a distant un-noticed noise in the back of her moind, slowly, numbly her mind began to register what had happened... She saw in her mind the car slamming full force into them, the terrable noise of crumpaling metal and her mothers one long scream...

it all felt so unreal, "this hasnt happened" she said to herself "ill wake up any minute and it'll all be a dream". A single tear trickled down her cheek as she stared at the wreckage of what used to be her mothers car. "Why couldnt i have been taken too, Why did i survive?" 'Why? WHY!!" she screamed and fell to the pavement crying , a great force gripped her heart and choked her of air. "Its not real! ITS NOT REAL!" she screamed. She lay crumpled against the pavement, feeling hte roughnes of it against her cheek as the hot tears coursed down her face.

A hand suddenly shook her lightly, they were saying something she realized but her mind wouldnt let her understand and she just stared at him with red swollen eyes. The man talking to her was pushed lightly out of the way by a woman in the same uniform. 'There from the hospital' she thought thickly, The woman crouched down next to her and talked slowly " your name is Erin isnt it?, we have to take you to the Hospital to make sure your alright", Erin stared at her for a moment and said quickly "My..My mother is she...." she tailed off. The womans eyes clouded over and she shook her head "Im sorry dear but your mother didnt survive.. she died on impact.. im so sorry." Erin stared at her and shook uncontrolably. The woman took her hand and helped her into the Ambulance, the sirens wailed and they started moving. Erin curled up in the back of the Ambulance and cryed herself into oblivion.....

Hope everyone likes my story there is more to come soon...

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Date: 6/16/2003 1:08:00 PM  From Authorid: 60945    aww! so sad! *cries*  
Date: 6/16/2003 1:17:00 PM  From Authorid: 53284    Dramatic start. I wonder where you're headed?  
Date: 6/16/2003 1:24:00 PM  From Authorid: 58611    Wow, I am in tears and this is just the beginning! Let us know when you post the next part!  
Date: 6/16/2003 1:40:00 PM  From Authorid: 61966    Aw! This is sooo sad!! Poor Erin. Sounds like you have the beginning of a really great story. I can't wait to read more! -BreathingBody  
Date: 6/16/2003 1:47:00 PM  From Authorid: 49172    Erin!!!! Write more... must make you write more.. :P *huggies* Luffoo les-bean luffer!  
Date: 6/19/2003 11:12:00 AM  From Authorid: 23101    Wild Child this story is coming along GREAT! I can't wait to read the second part. *hugs*  

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