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What If I Could Die Tonight?-------Moon Girl

  Author:  20750  Category:(Fiction) Created:(6/6/2003 7:52:00 PM)
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She walked into the room with caution! One wrong move would give her away! I have a mission to do she whispered to herself! Walking slowly she found Cleo eating at a tabel all by herself. She sat next to her!

She said, I can feel you, yet I can not see you! What do you want? To help you was the answer! I can! Just listen to me, you do not have to see me! I am here to help you! God she cried! I am going crazy! No your not she replied! I am here to tell you not to get in Philips car after work! Do not do it! Why should I listen to you she screamed? Listen & live or not listen & die!

The night flew by! Music blaring so many people dancing & drinking! She noticed Philip had been drinking alot! That worried her! Soon it was 2 am & the bar closed & 5 people were waiting to get in the car with Philip to get a ride home!

Philip found her locking up the place! He said come on babe we are all waiting for you! She said to him ok! I'll be there as soon as I am done here! Wait for me!

She then turned the last light out & shut the door & locked it! She thought to herself, what if the voice was true? What if I could die tonight? I can't take that chance! God! So she went back inside & hid!

They waited 20 minutes for her & she was a no show! Philip decided she had already left! They all left! He was drunk & saw 2 of everything! He decided he should not be driving & pulled over! He admitted to the 5 of them that he was to wasted to drive!

Jennifer said she could drive as she had not drank the entire night! He gave the keys to her! She started the car & drove!

Dave was up set & mad & was driving way to fast! He lost control of the car on the corner! His car hit another head on! All were killed! Six people died!

The next morning Cleo read of the 6th dead & grieved! Yet she was still alive, she did not get in the car! I have a purpose here she decided! It's to stop drinking & driving! I am living proof!----Moon Girl!





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Date: 6/6/2003 7:59:00 PM  From Authorid: 62184    That was an awesome story. More people should really listen to things like this. Great work. ~EndlessDreamer~  
Date: 6/6/2003 8:00:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 20750    Thank you!  
Date: 6/6/2003 8:03:00 PM  From Authorid: 3688    I like the message of this, I might suggest not using quite so many exclamation points, i personally find them a bit hard on the eyes... but it's just my opinion so take it or leave it   
Date: 6/6/2003 8:09:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 20750    Oh I know dreamer, that is a very bad habbit of mine!! LOL! Thank you!  
Date: 6/6/2003 8:11:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 20750    See Gawd. I did it again.  
Date: 6/6/2003 8:11:00 PM  From Authorid: 3688    MG.....lol we all have habits.....mine is the "...." i put everywhere lol  
Date: 6/6/2003 8:15:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 20750    Lol @ Dreamer. Thank you so much from the bottom of my heart for replying to this post. It means more to me than you could ever know!  
Date: 6/7/2003 9:35:00 AM  From Authorid: 61977    This was a good heartfelt story Moonie! Gotta love them points! I did not even notice it really. Bless your heart my talented friend.  
Date: 6/7/2003 10:13:00 AM  From Authorid: 28363    Nice work, notice the rush after you post something kewl   
Date: 6/10/2003 12:19:00 PM  From Authorid: 21435    Strange isn't it? The way that things happen. To be a survivor, simply because one changes one's mind at a critical moment. Loved the words, Moon Girl. Great message, also. Thanks and Write on   

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