Date: 5/23/2003 7:24:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42792
I know this may seem corny but it is a sestina... |
Date: 5/23/2003 7:46:00 PM
From Authorid: 3688
I don't think it's corny at all..in fact I think I'll bookmark it :P |
Date: 5/23/2003 7:46:00 PM
From Authorid: 53836
WOW!!! YOU DID IT!! Yeah! *CHEERS FOR NKA* and what a sestina it was! |
Date: 5/23/2003 7:47:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42792
Thanks, Jo! I am just so used to writing prose, this is kind of difficult. |
Date: 5/23/2003 7:48:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42792
Thanks, SC I don't know how soon I am going to be trying this again though |
Date: 5/23/2003 7:48:00 PM
From Authorid: 3688
i think you handle both pretty well |
Date: 5/23/2003 7:50:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42792
It may seem that way but this took a long time to put together. I really like being able to just sit and write freely as it comes to mind. |
Date: 5/23/2003 7:52:00 PM
From Authorid: 3688
NKA... I've found free verse poetry is easier...but i started out with the rhyming....lol |
Date: 5/23/2003 7:55:00 PM
From Authorid: 53836
LMBO!! no joke, what a mouthful!! It knocked your brain into overdrive, LOL What a scheme! |
Date: 5/23/2003 7:56:00 PM
From Authorid: 53836
and yeah, free verse feels the best when writing I hate forms, LOL Don't put me in a box!!! hehe |
Date: 5/23/2003 7:56:00 PM
From Authorid: 28190
Beautifully written Poem, Louise!!! I too dont think its corny at all. I have at times felt something similar while thinking back to my first love. Thank you for sharing this, it brough back some good old memories *hugs* |
Date: 5/23/2003 7:57:00 PM
From Authorid: 53836
DP, I'm a rhymin' fool...American Girl will tell you that I have a tendency to rhyme while in general conversation, LOL! |
Date: 5/23/2003 7:58:00 PM
From Authorid: 28190
I always write free verse, because when it comes to constraints within it, My brain locks up. Nka, you did this remarkably well *hugs* |
Date: 5/23/2003 8:18:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42792
Thanks so much, ladies SC, I often rhyme while conversing, as well. |
Date: 5/23/2003 9:04:00 PM
From Authorid: 53558
I like this peom, NKA. Thank you for sharing. Great big hugs. Take care. |
Date: 5/23/2003 9:26:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42792
thank you, Aromatics |
Date: 5/26/2003 7:03:00 AM
From Authorid: 56489
LOL, good job, rhyming fool here, can't seem to write if I can't rhyme, it sinks, lol. |
Date: 5/26/2003 7:35:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42792
Thanks, Aimless. It is a bit a pain in the arse to follow a format but it is a good brainercise! |
Date: 5/27/2003 4:35:00 AM
From Authorid: 56489
Your absolutly right NKA, never really thought of it that way & my brain needs all thhe exercise it can get, lol. |
Date: 5/27/2003 4:11:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42792
[email protected] too!!! |
Date: 6/21/2003 2:50:00 PM
From Authorid: 21435
Love holds us captive that way. Good to read your words again, NKA. Thanks and Write on |
Date: 6/22/2003 11:20:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42792
Awww, thanks, Kronk |