Date: 5/19/2003 6:12:00 PM
From Authorid: 55386
Oh wow. USM is full of poems that are making me see at a different point of view about my peoblem....Wow. This was amazing!!!! If this is really happening, I am starting to see your point. Great anger was put into this, and I loved it A LOT!!!! You made everything fit just perfectly. Great Job and Keep Writing!!!!  |
Date: 5/19/2003 6:28:00 PM
From Authorid: 54444
While I usually don't care a lot for poems of this genre, this is an exception. The poem is written so well in meter and rhythm, and the last line is a great line to tie everything together. it is not too long and it maks a point. every line works to bring everything together so it doesn't ramble on unnecessarily. In other words. Great job with a difficult topic. Thanks for posting.  |
Date: 5/19/2003 9:00:00 PM
From Authorid: 56489
Great poem! Short and to the point!  |
Date: 5/20/2003 3:41:00 PM
From Authorid: 43214
This was great! I can really relate to it. Thanks for sharing! =D  |
Date: 7/8/2003 8:20:00 PM
From Authorid: 60792
I feel ya dog *bookmark*  |
22254 Category:(Poetry) Created:(5/19/2003 5:39:00 PM)