Date: 5/19/2003 5:21:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 28363
;-)  |
Date: 5/20/2003 6:20:00 AM
From Authorid: 10915
LOL  |
Date: 5/22/2003 12:55:00 PM
From Authorid: 18506
awesome story! I think you should put this into a short story form and send it out...Ilove short stories...out of my favorite kinds of stories in fiction...its definetely the weird and strange short ones. Thank you for the fine read donno!  |
Date: 5/22/2003 2:28:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 28363
okay, maybe you can help me do that, i will message you ~(^;  |
Date: 5/22/2003 4:40:00 PM
From Authorid: 55903
great story! Thnks again for alerting me!  |
Date: 5/22/2003 5:08:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 28363
Your welcome, glad you enjoyed it  |
Date: 5/22/2003 5:43:00 PM
From Authorid: 46069
Ohhhh.... more more!!  |
Date: 5/24/2003 8:02:00 AM
From Authorid: 7341
Yikes...that's some scary power for such an evil person to have...  |
Date: 5/27/2003 6:59:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 28363
that was a scary power, thanks for reading, I hope you enjoyed it  |
Date: 5/29/2003 8:49:00 PM
From Authorid: 53836
whoa!! Killer ending! So she wasn't a fluesy, he just wanted the Dr. Schlessor to question it, along with everything else! The scariest part about the ending here is that it all could very well happen Great work, glad I finally got to finish it (darn pc)  |
Date: 5/30/2003 3:48:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 28363
hehe, you have tied the plot up very nicely, thank you for hanging in there thru the twists and turns  |
Date: 6/14/2003 3:14:00 AM
From Authorid: 47113
wow, i'm speechless...never expected this ending...lol..i agree with sky, you really need to submit your short stories....look how many fans you have here already...:-)  |
Date: 6/14/2003 12:10:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 28363
Angelinesheart, Thank you so much for taking the time to read and reply  |
Date: 6/17/2003 6:21:00 AM
From Authorid: 22852
Donno are you crazy.. you end it like that! Leaving me wanting more, just like a man..LOL.. Great story, once again you have captured my mind.  |
Date: 6/25/2003 10:14:00 PM
From Authorid: 45906
yikes, evil guy huh? good story keep em rolling thanks for telling me Para  |
Date: 6/30/2003 6:49:00 PM
From Authorid: 56359
Excellent story. It kept my eyes glued to the screen.-screen_writer-  |
Date: 7/6/2003 6:36:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 28363
Hi StormChaser  |
Date: 7/6/2003 6:37:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 28363
Thx FutureParamedic  |
Date: 7/6/2003 6:37:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 28363
hehe- screen writer, take care  |
Date: 8/23/2003 4:07:00 PM
From Authorid: 11341
I was thinking as I was reading, sometimes someone doesnt have to do anything to you to "ruin" your live, you can do it yourself out of paranoia (dang is that how you spell it?). I didnt see hypnoting coming lol.  |
Date: 9/4/2003 6:51:00 AM
From Authorid: 49025
Great story, Donno. You know how much I love your writing!!  |