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Date: 5/7/2003 1:58:00 PM
From Authorid: 53558
A very sensitive poem, Aimless, well written. Are you hurting. Big hugs.  |
Date: 5/7/2003 2:53:00 PM
From Authorid: 8024
I can relate aimless ... I hope the decisions well made ... excellent expression within your words ...  |
Date: 5/7/2003 3:10:00 PM
From Authorid: 21435
Hi Aimless  Good one, Lady. There comes a time when one has to commit or beat it... Thanks for the fine read. Write on  |
Date: 5/8/2003 7:06:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 56489
Thanks Aromantics not hurting it just popped into my head so I thought I better write it down, thanks for asking (hugs), thanks cc28 & Kronk.  |
Date: 5/8/2003 3:24:00 PM
From Authorid: 28363
ooh this is very refreshing   |
Date: 5/8/2003 8:01:00 PM
From Authorid: 42703
Good poem well written nice to read!  |
Date: 5/9/2003 4:39:00 AM
From Authorid: 28946
Hugs. Let that old 'dog' go, Sweetie and sink in that ship he built. You will finding a better model down the road that will appreciate a good thing.  |
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Date: 5/9/2003 5:53:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 56489
Lol @ Donno, thanks Jaak & Penny. |
Date: 5/12/2003 5:50:00 PM
From Authorid: 11097
Great poem of expression and emotion... decisions are the keys to a good life..I pray the right decision is made for you <3  |
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Date: 5/13/2003 7:31:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 56489
Thanks princess of light. |
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Date: 5/17/2003 1:15:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 56489
Lol @ Penny many old dogs I write poetry about. |
Date: 6/6/2003 8:05:00 PM
From Authorid: 54444
Time wounds all heels and heals all wounds. Nicely written poem and I hope things work out for you for the best, my friend.  |
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Date: 6/9/2003 1:47:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 56489
Thanks MOA. Glad to see you back. |
Date: 8/29/2003 1:25:00 PM
From Authorid: 33286
this is good too, though it kind of lost flow for me in a couple spots, but overall twas good.  |
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Date: 8/29/2003 1:28:00 PM
From Authorid: 33286
this is good too, though it kind of lost flow for me in a couple spots, but overall twas good. if you are interested in seeing what I mean message me and I will go over it, I have learned a little about editing my own stuff lately. |
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Date: 9/2/2003 7:03:00 AM
From Authorid: 33286
try this. ... I know the decision (weighs) on your mind,//////// if we (can) make it (to) the end of time.///////////................ You (delete may) think the grass is greener on the other side,/////////// but time will show you there's nothing (to) find.///////////............ There's no other woman that will let you be (delete this, it is implied--who you want to be,)//////// or give you the freedom you so desperately need.//////////........ You know (that I am) a woman of my word,//////////// (and) once you leave your nose is to the curb./////////////.......... There's no going back (dear,) I only do it once,///////////// it's up to you to decide if our ship has sunk.////////////............ I want you to know I love you with all (of) my heart,///////////// I carried (your) flame (delete for you) right from the start./////////////........... I know (you’re) young and have to sort things out,////////// but my time is ticking and that's what it's (delete all) about.///////////............ Like I said I won't go back and do it again,/////////// time heals (delete all) wounds and will mend me in the end.//////////.......... ( I might also change the word mend...maybe use "spare" to get rid of the last rhyme...) |
Date: 2/22/2004 5:27:00 PM
From Authorid: 1432
Very well expressed! Another one I really like ..  |
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Date: 2/24/2004 5:29:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 56489
Thanks Banner. |
Date: 1/23/2005 10:26:00 AM
From Authorid: 63041
How I loved this read. Loving even in the ultimatum.  |
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Date: 1/24/2005 7:07:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 56489
Thanks Silver. |
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