Date: 4/21/2003 7:25:00 PM
From Authorid: 42945
Penny, this is an excellent poem hun, sad but well written and thank you for sharing it with me...hugs  |
Date: 4/21/2003 7:42:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 28946
Thank you, Zema for your encouragement, your friendship, and your comment.  |
Date: 4/21/2003 8:31:00 PM
From Authorid: 53836
This reminded me of Laci Peterson for some reason. Great work Penny! Glad I got to read it, keep writing   |
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Date: 4/21/2003 8:31:00 PM
From Authorid: 53836
This reminded me of Laci Peterson for some reason. Great work Penny! Glad I got to read it, keep writing |
Date: 4/21/2003 9:02:00 PM
From Authorid: 42703
I agree with everyone else!  |
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Date: 4/21/2003 9:14:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 28946
Thanks Space Case for your comments. I didn't have that poor girl and her baby in my thoughts when I wrote this though. |
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Date: 4/21/2003 9:14:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 28946
Hi JAak, thanks for stopping by. |
Date: 4/21/2003 9:49:00 PM
From Authorid: 61966
This is so sad, that poor little girl! This is yet another great poem Penny. Your poems always seem so real, I bet things like that go on all the time. Thank you for sharing this with us all. -BreathingBody  |
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Date: 4/21/2003 10:39:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 28946
Yes, horrid things to go on sometimes in the world that is hard to talk about. Thanks so much Crystal for reading and commenting to this. Hugs. |
Date: 4/21/2003 10:43:00 PM
From Authorid: 56489
Man, Penny I have to agree with a couple of the comments, very sad, but your poems are so real, but this just left me speechless.  |
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Date: 4/21/2003 11:01:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 28946
Thanks Aimless. Hugs. |
Date: 4/22/2003 10:57:00 AM
From Authorid: 53961
Wow! This is really sad. Great descriptive writing.  |
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Date: 4/22/2003 3:30:00 PM
From Authorid: 37433
WOW! This was written really well...great work Penny! |
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Date: 4/22/2003 5:01:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 28946
Thank you Paula and MaryJane for your nice comments. |
Date: 4/22/2003 6:03:00 PM
From Authorid: 18506
hi sweetie, that WAS awesome...I mean I JUST LOVE the way it is written (so well!) you know this can apply to so many 'broken homes'...it truly is sad that so many of us can relate because we have lost. but pain does equal the most beautiful (but sad) poetry....  |
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Date: 4/22/2003 6:44:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 28946
That is very true, Skya. I am not very good at writing but sure appreciate my friends compliments anyways. I wish that people would treat each other with kindness and not hurt the other so bad that death would look better than having to live with their abuse. But then, some like to deliberately hurt others for just the thrill. Thank you Sweetie for being one of my friends and commenting here. God Bless. |
Date: 4/23/2003 4:17:00 PM
From Authorid: 30200
i understand this poem momma and i think it says it all.i love u  |
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Date: 4/23/2003 9:51:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 28946
Thanks Pogo. Hugs! |
Date: 5/7/2003 9:42:00 PM
From Authorid: 21435
Hard, haunting and beautiful poetry. Penny, I love it. Write on  |
Date: 5/7/2003 9:54:00 PM
From Authorid: 12341
Penny, what a good writer you are! Very sad, but well written and touches the heart.  |
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Date: 5/8/2003 2:49:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 28946
Thank you so very much Kronk and Shadow Ghost. This poem was a little about my past and an answer to a question on why the hurting can last over 30 years. |
Date: 6/8/2003 7:42:00 AM
From Authorid: 18111
Wow! when you are riled your stoccato-like pace & style hits the point home like pepper spray!! Very good.  |
