Date: 4/20/2003 6:11:00 PM
From Authorid: 48989
really good poem, and it had a really good point in there 2, i like what u said about God's way of protecting us from a pain to unbearable, its a different way of thinking about things. thank you for sharing this with us, moreover, thank u 4 sharing it with me, made me think quite a bit. good luck and keep writing  |
Date: 4/20/2003 9:31:00 PM
From Authorid: 61966
I almost cried as I was reading this poem. It reminded me of last summer when I had to move away from all my friends and change schools. It's like you put all my feelings into this poem right here. I think you've done a really great job with this, it's a wonderful poem. Yes, god was protecting me from something that would have been really bad. Thank you for sharing this with us all. *bookmarks* -BreathingBody  |
Date: 4/21/2003 11:54:00 PM
From Authorid: 55970
Wow, this is a beautiful poem..I read it 3 times before I replied, LOL..Lovely words  *hugs* Love always, ~Tara~  |
Date: 4/25/2003 7:58:00 PM
From Authorid: 54444
Wow there are some really great lines (and thoughts) in this poem. this is so good that I am going to have to check out some of your other posts. Thanks for posting this.  |
Date: 4/25/2003 10:11:00 PM
From Authorid: 31349
wow this is really good..great job hun  |
Date: 7/27/2003 10:31:00 PM
From Authorid: 45619
wow.........that was awesome, but so sad at the same time, i'm so sorry about what happened between you guys, even tho it was a long time ago now. hearts don't forget things like that easily, time will never make it better, only less painful.  |
57721 Category:(Poetry) Created:(4/20/2003 4:11:00 PM)