Date: 4/8/2003 5:12:00 PM
From Authorid: 37101
What Bach did with notes and Monet did with colors, you do with words. -  |
Date: 4/8/2003 5:15:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 54444
II corinthians 5:1,2,3 "For we know that if our earthly house of this tabernacle were dissolved, we have a building of God, a house not made with hands, eternal in the heavens.For in this we groan, earnestly desiring to be clothed upon with our house whichis from heaven: If so be that being clothed we shall not be found naked (without a body)" My poem, like Paul's simile is about the new eternal body we will receive for our life after death. I just want to make sure that no one misunderstands my metaphore.  |
|
Date: 4/8/2003 5:17:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 54444
Smooth, how could any compliment be higher than that. You truely humble me. Thank you, my friend. |
Date: 4/8/2003 9:05:00 PM
From Authorid: 60992
MOA, this was great really good!!..This was so sweet and ohh..I loved it..lol..You left me really speechless!!..In Kronk's words, Write On!
*hugs*
-des  |
Date: 4/8/2003 9:53:00 PM
From Authorid: 56489
Such a sweet poem MOA, my mom used to do the same thing, lol, but seamstress she was not, lol.  |
Date: 4/8/2003 11:11:00 PM
From Authorid: 53427
That was a beautiful compliment that Smooth Criminal gave you and I completely agree with it.  |
Date: 4/8/2003 11:24:00 PM
From Authorid: 12341
Beautiful words and thoughts.  |
Date: 4/9/2003 6:19:00 AM
From Authorid: 46320
An amazing poet you are! I loved this, and the metaphor was not lost on me. Great, great, great! Be Good...  |
|
Date: 4/9/2003 1:45:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 54444
Thank you all my friends who stopped by to read this poem andto all who have posted comments. the great feeling you have given me is only suropassed by the feelings i have about what has been happening in Iraq today. Seeing those kids being released from prison was the haymaker for me. God bless America and long live free Iraq.. |
Date: 4/9/2003 2:11:00 PM
From Authorid: 57116
I am speechless  |
|
Date: 4/9/2003 2:21:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 54444
Thanks Mustang |
Date: 4/10/2003 5:27:00 PM
From Authorid: 60018
Another great one to add to the collection :P Tell your Mom to make me something cool too@!  |
|
Date: 4/10/2003 8:12:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 54444
OK PB its a done deal LOL |
Date: 4/15/2003 7:32:00 PM
From Authorid: 36901
Absolutely beautiful!  |
Date: 4/15/2003 11:39:00 PM
From Authorid: 53558
Awww, Bro, that is so, so, so beautiful. Words fail me.  |
|
Date: 4/16/2003 3:32:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 54444
Thanky sis, you too Apryl |
Date: 7/10/2003 4:11:00 PM
From Authorid: 61901
Hey, this is really good, it touched me. I see a song in this poem.  |
