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Life at 70.....JAak

  Author:  42703  Category:(Poetry) Created:(4/3/2003 7:46:00 PM)
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fading like a dream,
read and bleed and soak in death,
for death is an plessure unlike the rest,
some people fear it..others it really doesn't matter,
but how happy we maybe when we come face to face with God,
I can't put it into words right now-as you've left me claimly-I like what I seen,
in a moment we lost control-and let one another see the other ones soul,
so nice and white-it shook like water during a thunderstorm,
not out of fear..but at the relief of being set free-
now we might show it to others..
but it'll never be the same as the first time..we believed in each other,
trust sinking in thoughts as it may-compairs equal only to the disappointments we've faced,
and in this bed we've made a dream-what should have waited until I was sure..
you were the one for me,
it's too far to go back now-we've bonded forever,
in this thing called life-we're here-for better or worse..
lifting up to our own imagination what may have been so beautiful,
is now a mush of confussion-feelings so warm,yet premature-
am so tired and happy and full of wonder,
how did this effect you?
doesn't matter..either one, cause it's already through,
we can just sit here and cry for ourselfs..or might we carry on,
with visions past..the grand adventure done.

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Date: 4/3/2003 7:58:00 PM  From Authorid: 42945    excellent poem Jimmy, you've outdone yourself in this one...love the words that you have put together here...hugs Aunt  
Date: 4/3/2003 8:01:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 42703    Thanks AUnt Zema for your commentsOve and hugss.  
Date: 4/3/2003 8:47:00 PM  From Authorid: 42792    This is really excellent. One of your best, IMO! I really loved it.  
Date: 4/4/2003 6:28:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 42703    Thanks NKA SIs for your commentsove and Hugs and God bless!  
Date: 4/4/2003 7:06:00 AM  From Authorid: 8024    Carry on my friend ... I talked to a man about my problems in life one day was a conversation I'll never forget ... I really didn't know the man but his words I can never forget ...he said to me " c you have only two choices in life Get busy livin, or get busy dying ... it's up to you ... " decisions come hard some time jaak ... you know as well as I ... Hope you can creat  
Date: 4/4/2003 7:07:00 AM  From Authorid: 8024    hope you can creat new grand adventures ... sorry I got cut off jaak ... take care and write ...write ... write ...   
Date: 4/4/2003 6:51:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 42703    hehehe thanks CC for your comments  
Date: 4/4/2003 10:32:00 PM  From Authorid: 28125    This is a very well written poem HunE...I really like the words and it flows very well...Great Job...Love you Lots...Hugs and Kisses...ICL~*~*~*~YOur GIrl~*~*~*~  
Date: 4/5/2003 6:09:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 42703    Thanks for your comments Amy,my Luv,HUgs and kisses,LOve you bunchies~*YOUR GUy~*  
Date: 4/6/2003 3:10:00 AM  From Authorid: 54441    WOW!this is awesome,BRO!!keep writing forever ...*HUGS*  
Date: 4/6/2003 7:33:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 42703    Thanks SIs for your comments*HUgs*  
Date: 4/7/2003 11:57:00 PM  From Authorid: 56489    Excellent poem Jaak!  
Date: 4/8/2003 11:56:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 42703    Thanks Aimless for your comments  

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