Date: 3/3/2003 7:56:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 54444
thought I would like to try a new technique. Hope you guys like it. |
Date: 3/3/2003 8:39:00 PM
From Authorid: 53961
I like this very much. Very descriptive and deep. Reminds me of the nights when it snows and the sky is light at 3 a.m. before anyone has tread on it. |
Date: 3/3/2003 8:40:00 PM
From Authorid: 53961
<meant to say tread on the snow.> |
Date: 3/3/2003 9:08:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 54444
Thanks wildflower. Appreciate your comment very much |
Date: 3/3/2003 10:10:00 PM
From Authorid: 56489
Man Of Asgard, Great poem but why mess with perfection? |
Date: 3/3/2003 10:24:00 PM
From Authorid: 12341
I like! Very good! |
Date: 3/3/2003 10:50:00 PM
From Authorid: 29928
MOA I love it..it is beautiful. I likethe style too. Hugs, |
Date: 3/4/2003 12:45:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 54444
aimless are you saying I shouldn't change styles? I wont this is just an experiment. thanks for the input |
Date: 3/4/2003 12:46:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 54444
shadowghost and Pammia thanks for your comments too. |
Date: 3/4/2003 4:50:00 AM
From Authorid: 57116
I now have a memory of being somewhere that I really wasn't (virtual vacation?)...lol...very descriptive writing...I enjoyed it very much. |
Date: 3/4/2003 5:44:00 AM
From Authorid: 60018
Wow grandpa Great work. I noticed that you used a new technique as soon as I started reading it lol. I really like it great job Hope you're adding it to the book. |
Date: 3/4/2003 6:04:00 AM
From Authorid: 46320
A different style, but still great! Sending us on a vacation in our minds. Loved it. Be Good... |
Date: 3/4/2003 8:12:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 54444
thanks Mustang and American girl. I appreciate your time and comments. Yes, Blizzy, I think it passes my test and will go into the book. How u been? |
Date: 3/4/2003 10:05:00 AM
From Authorid: 14754
what a great poem..you do have talent..wish i did..thanks for sharing your memories with us. |
Date: 3/4/2003 11:44:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 54444
thank you Tweeti...and u do have talent |
Date: 3/4/2003 4:39:00 PM
From Authorid: 52187
beautiful, I like it very much. I aggree with Aimless too. ^-^ |
Date: 3/4/2003 4:42:00 PM
From Authorid: 53284
Made me feel the cold of winter. |
Date: 3/4/2003 5:16:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 54444
thanks moon angel thank you too bob |
Date: 3/4/2003 8:59:00 PM
From Authorid: 21435
Ride on..Man of Asgard. Too cool. Road trippin'. Thanks for the fine read. Write on.... |
Date: 3/4/2003 9:39:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 54444
Thanks Kronk...I actually was thinking about some of your poems when I wrote this |
Date: 4/16/2003 6:31:00 AM
From Authorid: 53558
A very descriptive poem, Bor, I like it a lot. |