Date: 1/28/2003 7:50:00 PM
From Authorid: 51241
um.........nice poem??? good poem, nice emotional release, maybe cut down in the repitions of certain phrases???? coo, 1 |
Date: 1/28/2003 8:16:00 PM
From Authorid: 6558
this is definitely a great emotional release. (I know the repetition helps me feel like I've REALLY gotten it out.) I hope things work out. Sometimes your friends do things that hurt, and it can either end the friendship or merely put it on hold for a bit. That is up to you. |
Date: 1/29/2003 9:08:00 AM
From Authorid: 35160
i know exactly how u feel. i just went through a betrayel of my own last month. and its so hard 2 deal with. the worst pain i could ever imagine. 8^( huggs shay |
Date: 1/30/2003 6:34:00 AM
From Authorid: 44348
good poem but what i ahve to say is how would you feel if your freind went and was depressed and and cried all the time because she ahd a chancce at love but her freind made her stop because it was her ex look love is blind let your freind be happy with him it may hurt i've been through worse then you my freind slept with my girl but i know that they both are happy and thats all i care about yes i did want to kill him but i didn't and now they are happy and in love let them have love even if it hurts if you want to talk to me just im me or msg my aim name is trpvirus my yahoo is tripvirus i am usually on aim though so try that first |
Date: 12/2/2005 12:19:00 PM
From Authorid: 18928
good writing! you definetely get your point across. |