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Date: 1/28/2003 1:43:00 PM From Authorid: 21435 Oh Yeah! Filo, this is great. You had "me" looking for an exit. Loved it. Write on.... |
Date: 1/28/2003 5:24:00 PM From Authorid: 61966 Wow, I think this is a great poem!! I liked it alot. Thanks for sharing this with us! -BreathingBody |
Date: 4/4/2003 2:46:00 PM
From Authorid: 20725
I don't know if i got exactly what you wanted the readers to get from this....but it made me feel heartache...i hate it when i see an ex....and they are jsut teh same as when i was in love with them....i just see them sitting there...and sometimes i feel like i am still in love with them...it hurts....and i always look for a way out... This was a great post. Keep writting and jsut remember...after a few more drinks she wont look like the girl in your wallet....she'll jsut be drunk....j/k Sarajoy Aka |
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