Date: 12/18/2002 12:19:00 PM
From Authorid: 59751
Keep it up...I want to read about the scary parts of the story.  |
Date: 12/18/2002 12:19:00 PM
From Authorid: 46139
I'm interested Shoot...was there any ghostly sites
are activities????  |
Date: 12/18/2002 12:20:00 PM
From Authorid: 53478
Great start! Keep on writing!  |
Date: 12/18/2002 12:20:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 29338
ok ill start on the rest
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Date: 12/18/2002 12:21:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 29338
i forgot i have to wait for a while.
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Date: 12/18/2002 12:34:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 29338
Ill tell you some stuff i wont put in the story so it will make more sence.
The red room is the name of the secret room in the story. A long time ago a married couple moved to that area to build a house. It took may years because workers kept suposuvly comiting suicide. But some people knew better. That ground was haunter before they even thought of bulding there. Some say it was an indian berial ground. no one knows for sure. But when the house was finally built the couple was left comleatly alone. Except for the nephew who once every month went to check on his realitives. but on one month he found his beloved aunt and uncle mangled and twisted and completaly desocrated beond recognition. The nephew was so hert broken that he shot himself in that very room with them. It took moths before someone actually called the cops. It was a door to door salsmen. After that they painted the walls red to cover the blood. But no one would buy the house. The story died but thoude still stood, empty until now. |
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Date: 12/18/2002 12:46:00 PM
From Authorid: 53478
Cool synopsis! |
Date: 12/18/2002 2:47:00 PM
From Authorid: 6814
Good story. what happens next?  |
Date: 12/18/2002 3:20:00 PM
From Authorid: 61966
Oh I'm really interested in hearing some more!! -BreathingBody  |
Date: 12/18/2002 3:37:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 29338
I wrote more if u want to look at it
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Date: 12/19/2002 8:13:00 AM
From Authorid: 45876
It sounds good. Start the next part soon please!  |
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Date: 12/19/2002 1:31:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 29338
The admins deleted it becouse it hade bleeped profanity. And i would have changed it but the just deleted it. |
Date: 1/11/2003 4:01:00 PM
From Authorid: 51906
ill read the next part!  |
Date: 9/17/2005 11:51:00 PM
From Authorid: 7574
Not too shabby.  |
