Date: 12/17/2002 11:14:00 PM
From Authorid: 48989
WOW! i loved this poem. i havent read anything greater on here so far. and no, its not just lip service. i really did like this poem a lot. thank u so much for sharing it with all of us. |
Date: 12/18/2002 12:03:00 AM
From Authorid: 53961
Boy! Made me stand up and take notice! Great posting! |
Date: 12/18/2002 2:16:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 54444
Thanks insatiable. what a wonderful complement. I appreciate you reading my poetry and taking time to comment. There ars several other poems I have posted if you have a desire to read through them. |
Date: 12/18/2002 2:18:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 54444
Thank you wildflower. And what a neat alaias and tag you have. |
Date: 12/18/2002 6:54:00 AM
From Authorid: 25828
wow, this is awesome MOA 8-) |
Date: 12/18/2002 8:24:00 AM
From Authorid: 61968
That was great. Something I am sure all of us have experienced once or twice in our lives. The words deeply express the loss that has been felt. Good job. I look forward to reading more of your writing....Shadow Tiger. |
Date: 12/18/2002 4:49:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 54444
Thanks everyone for your comments |
Date: 12/19/2002 8:16:00 PM
From Authorid: 42568
You know what, I was going to read this earlier today but I had to leave for work and didn't get the chance..........this is really well written, and sorted out. took me a while to read because i've been getting really bad migraines lately. I think this poems is one of your best Loondiessssssssssssssssssssss! |
Date: 12/19/2002 8:57:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 54444
Thank You Bethann. I value your opinion a lot. I sure hope you get over the headache though. |
Date: 12/22/2002 1:50:00 AM
From Authorid: 53558
You have a great talent, Bro. Thank you for sharing it with us. |
Date: 12/22/2002 5:54:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 54444
Thanks, Aromantics, This wan was not easy to write, but it was fun writing it. I had a teacher in 7th grade and she always stressed that every writing must answer the 5 W's. which gave me the outline for the poem. |