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Date: 11/1/2002 12:59:00 AM
From Authorid: 48877
This was wonderful. Very well written.  |
Date: 11/1/2002 9:37:00 AM
From Authorid: 34775
* And she lands on the ground with a thud*..."my whole body is not as heavy as the word sad" ~ Anabel. Sorry to quote myself, but instantly that came to mind. I love your last three lines...especially " hopeful...hung heavy"...I am a fool for the use of alliteration *swoons*... All I can say, is if they were originally hopeful, my friend, they still are. You make me want to write.  |
Date: 1/16/2003 8:41:00 AM
From Authorid: 56840
You have a way of making me think and dwell deeper on things I would not otherwise deign to think on.. Thank you for this beautifully worded poem.. Keep Writing..   |
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28944 Category:(Poetry) Created:(10/31/2002 7:50:00 PM)