Date: 10/5/2002 9:33:00 PM
From Authorid: 56410
Wow! A very powerful poem. Great job! and yes, imprisoned is spelled right.  |
Date: 10/5/2002 9:34:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 9160
Thanks AV, now i can update it and take that part out.   |
Date: 10/5/2002 9:35:00 PM
From Authorid: 28944
'Never free in your presence...' i don't understand how this happens, but i know exactly what you mean. astral pixilator  |
Date: 10/5/2002 10:43:00 PM
From Authorid: 59151
strong and true. powerful words. i can feel where you are coming from...taurus32  |
Date: 10/5/2002 11:04:00 PM
From Authorid: 3835
Oh wow... there are numerous ways to take this poem, and that is what captures my attention most. This was so well written, and the reader can use many paths to interpret the meaning of what the author has written about. Thank you for sharing this with us!  |
