Date: 9/11/2002 8:13:00 PM
From Authorid: 46069
.. i like this Hey Larry.. thanx for sharing..  |
Date: 9/11/2002 8:13:00 PM
From Authorid: 53836
I heard a Bluegrass song about an old washed out woman, past her prime, it was titled something like, "She's to be pitied"...this poem reminded me of that song...good story in verse, Larry!~SpaceCase  |
Date: 9/11/2002 8:16:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 5940
Thanks Sk8r and Space Case!! Space Case, what you said kinda reminds me of this person, only in a reverse way, but what you said is true, in this case she is washed out as she is starting out...if that makes any sense?   |
Date: 9/11/2002 8:17:00 PM
From Authorid: 37809
This was a very neat poem, and I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.  |
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Date: 9/11/2002 8:22:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 5940
I thank you DGNR84LIFE, glad you enjoyed it. |
Date: 9/11/2002 8:42:00 PM
From Authorid: 53836
 sad sense Larry boo-hoo for her...living fast won't let youth last!~SpaceCase |
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Date: 9/11/2002 8:49:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 5940
Aye !!!! So true Space Case!!!!! |
Date: 9/11/2002 8:59:00 PM
From Authorid: 33286
and I was thinking of a co-worker I once knew,, but now I am thinking of the Dr. Hook song Queen of the Silver Dollar... great poem here  |
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Date: 9/11/2002 9:21:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 5940
Ahhh Hack, I see you got the gist of this. Thanks for having a look, and I need to check out Dr. Hook! |
Date: 9/12/2002 1:02:00 AM
From Authorid: 12239
Very nice.Your poems are always unique and refreshing to read.  |
Date: 9/12/2002 4:03:00 AM
From Authorid: 30747
Wow Larry this is truely awesome. As I read it I could think of several people I've known througeout my life that this applied to. The type that let power go to their heads and become something they're really not. I also love the last line because that's one of my pet peeves...people who don't give credit where it's due makes me want to scream. I love this...bookmarked. *hugs and smiles*  |
Date: 9/12/2002 4:36:00 AM
From Authorid: 5061
Larry,I understand fully.you know it's kind of ironic you'd write something like this right now.i'll exsplain later kiddo.Good job,love jeanie/  |
Date: 9/12/2002 10:31:00 AM
From Authorid: 3642
This poem Is an excellent peice of writing .....I Think You do poetry very well Hey Larry ..It Has a clear cut message and good flow ,You can feel the emotion dripping off of This One .....so Much so It makes me want To take a look at me , To Make sure I dont float to high Off the ground my self at Times ,,,usally what happens In My case ...Its like Me walking along ..and finding two dollars Layed out On The ground ( I Get all puffed up and tickled over The whole Thing ..Then Turn the corner Only to see a Flat On My car That needs fixed ......so I guess You could say .I am fast to deflate .....Its a Good message Mister ......Ps very cool using words seldom used   |
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Date: 9/12/2002 8:49:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 5940
Thanks for all the replies, and just so you know...this is reference to the workplace, and the hope that this person will see the other side of the coin. |
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Date: 9/14/2002 2:34:00 AM
From Authorid: 5061
lol,don't count on this other person seeing anything other than them selves larry.not when you walk around with blinders on.take care my firend,love jeanie/ |
