Date: 7/22/2002 11:32:00 PM
From Authorid: 30051
Ohhh Momma kick her BUTT!!!! Good story..I love it for reals...write it on paper!!!! I love it i love it..okay I'm going to bed!!!! Crybaby got your way!! now for reals I;m going to SLEEEEP!!! Love ya *hugs* and a pinch on the booty |
Date: 7/23/2002 6:29:00 AM
From Authorid: 38278
Good story but also sad. |
Date: 7/23/2002 8:48:00 AM
From Authorid: 35160
omg no!!!!! why would she do that . omg. i cant wait till the next part. i havnt been this intranced in a story in a long time. gr8 work sweety. 8^) huggs shay |
Date: 7/23/2002 9:46:00 AM
From Authorid: 49742
Oh that was soo good! I like the way you have the audience feeling what she feels, throuhout the whole story! Great job! You describe it soo well, that it's like I can see it, like watching a movie! Or even like I'm watching the whole thing from the sidelines...like I'm right there watching all of you. |
Date: 7/25/2002 9:56:00 AM
From Authorid: 57721
You describe everything so well. I feel like I'm really there! Jadeeyes |
Date: 7/26/2002 1:05:00 PM
From Authorid: 52990
oh thats awful!!! She cant get away with it!!! on to chapter 4. -chaosforever |
Date: 8/23/2003 3:46:00 PM
From Authorid: 1799
omg.. what a horrible friend! |
Date: 8/23/2003 3:57:00 PM
From Authorid: 56359
That's horrible. How about that. Very well written though. I'm loving this story.-screen_writer- |
Date: 8/23/2003 10:02:00 PM
From Authorid: 45684
Oh man Sandi is an awful friend |
Date: 8/23/2003 11:29:00 PM
From Authorid: 56840
Again you can hear the tiny tapping of her high heels on the pavement <-- This line is brilliant.. So is this --> before she quitely snuck out the back door to her car before any one could see the first teardrop fall. That is so vivid. So alive.. On to the next part.. |
Date: 8/23/2003 11:30:00 PM
From Authorid: 56840
By the way, I have felt EXACTLY the way she felt.. I have been there, i have known how agonizing it is.. You put me through a reliving of it, but that is only because you wrote it so wonderfully that I had no choice but to be pulled in.. |