Date: 7/22/2002 9:32:00 PM
From Authorid: 30477
I like this a lot, I don't know why it hasn't gotten more replies. A lot of the rhyming poems posted have one thing in common - filler lines that are essentially meaningless and have obviously just been added to fulfil the "scheme." This one, however, is a refreshing change from the afformentioned. Every line is full of feeling, you've done a great job here.  |
Date: 7/22/2002 9:34:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 53836
thank you Jeff, I encourage you to check out more of my poetry...I will not rhyme a word unless it carries proper definition...I don't just throw rhyming words out to make it sound good, I appreciate this observation  ~SpaceCase  |
Date: 7/22/2002 9:37:00 PM
From Authorid: 42568
Oh god.. Space I know what thats like.. and by a musician, too. Wonderful poem, my sweet little dumpling! lol  |
Date: 7/23/2002 12:57:00 PM
From Authorid: 46320
Super SpaceCase! I can feel this one. Be Good...  |
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Date: 7/23/2002 1:21:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 53836
I do best when telling the painful truth, LMBO OUCH!!~SpaceCase |
Date: 9/2/2002 11:56:00 AM
From Authorid: 21435
Great work, SpaceCase. Love lost and primal instinct. Way to right it lady..Thanks and Write on...  |
