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Date: 6/22/2002 11:03:00 PM
From Authorid: 35160
this is a very good poem hun. gr8 job. 8^) huggs shay ![]() |
Date: 6/23/2002 1:38:00 AM
From Authorid: 30575
Really good, thanks for sharing![]() ![]() |
Date: 6/24/2002 12:03:00 AM
From Authorid: 20579
My.......I haver been looking for a way to describe my pain in ohio and you just said it all lefty.....This is a great poem!! Down wit the clown Milenko ![]() |
Date: 6/24/2002 9:01:00 PM From Authorid: 56238 wow i love this its so great!! good poem!! |
Date: 6/27/2002 11:17:00 PM
From Authorid: 21435
Heavy poetry, Left Behind. You did a fine job with this one. Write on.... ![]() |
Date: 6/27/2002 11:43:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 51292
aww thanks Kronk!! You know how much these comments mean to me!! ![]() |
Date: 7/19/2002 10:33:00 PM
From Authorid: 53129
This is so great I really enjoyed this poem makes me glad i came back to check up on your stories. ![]() |
Date: 7/23/2002 9:07:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 51292
thanks xomb!! ![]() |
Date: 7/26/2002 12:01:00 AM
From Authorid: 10534
oh hey i just realized that it was posted on my birthday! lol cool ![]() |
Date: 7/26/2002 12:01:00 AM
From Authorid: 10534
this is a great poem, i love it! awesome job on it ![]() ![]() |
Date: 7/26/2002 6:29:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 51292
ICY!! lol thanks for the comments and happy late birthday!! 8D ![]() |
Date: 7/26/2002 9:15:00 PM From Authorid: 59826 good poem sis!! soul seeker |
Date: 1/31/2004 10:29:00 AM
From Authorid: 8024
yes I love the way you write .. not a very happy poem but an excellent one none the less .. I know these feeling very well yup .. that is how life goes alot for me .. though I can keep trying if I so choose ... ![]() |
Date: 2/1/2004 9:34:00 AM
From Authorid: 48527
simple but very meaningful words, well written! ![]() |
Date: 2/10/2004 3:35:00 AM
From Authorid: 32806
KABOOM!!!!!! hehe, been expecting the big bang for ages, seems the world can hold a lotta pressure still. ![]() to ever care again do you know how i feel do you care how ive been< was an excellent verse (as was the whole poem) I know and because I know, I care. Peace and Harmony. ![]() |
Date: 2/13/2004 10:33:00 AM
From Authorid: 35051
I like your poem it is so true. Life is not really worth living because we all die so what is the point? Very good effort ![]() |
Date: 2/16/2004 3:16:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 51292
Thanks you guys!! Thanks Sagi Its nice to see you thanks to everyone for reading it really means a lot!! 8o) ![]() |
Date: 4/17/2005 10:45:00 AM
From Authorid: 28363
fantastic poem, thanks for sharing ![]() |
Date: 5/13/2005 1:11:00 AM
From Authorid: 8024
double take ... ![]() ![]() |
Date: 6/2/2005 12:07:00 PM
From Authorid: 59418
Great poem ![]() ![]() |
Date: 6/2/2005 9:55:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 51292
Thanks for reading my work guys, it means a lot!! 80) ![]() |
Date: 9/12/2005 12:58:00 PM
From Authorid: 18111
Weighty words evoke strong emotions. I enjoyed & it makes me think. ![]() |
Date: 11/14/2005 8:43:00 AM
From Authorid: 63205
Very well written and thoughts aptly expressed! I can certainly relate to the feeling...NbN ![]() |
Date: 8/4/2007 9:42:00 AM
From Authorid: 18111
totally get it! Great expression of inner frustration. ![]() |
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