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Wake Up Heavy~ by Anabel

  Author:  34775  Category:(Poetry) Created:(6/4/2002 9:07:00 PM)
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Folding into madness
With
The searchlight televison,
I wake up heavy...
In the darkness,
Fumbling for a match.
So tired
Of breathing
From empty bottles;
Saying a prayer for every suffocated child.
There is no way
To tell
The love of another.
Drunk on solitude,
Escaped in fairy tales-
I've sewn long sheets
Of words
To cover my nakedness
While-
With sun and
Blue, blue wind in your eye-
You've broken your legs
On purpose
So you can
Grow up begging.

I wake up heavy.

I beg too...
That my prayer is too loud
For your god to ignore.

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Date: 6/4/2002 9:08:00 PM  From Authorid: 49459    Great poem. Very powerful.  
Date: 6/4/2002 9:09:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 34775    Thanks RLC, I am really glad that you thought so  
Date: 6/4/2002 9:25:00 PM  From Authorid: 46091    That is heavy... whoa... I think I do need a couple of beers before I read this again. I love you baby... I want to lift your burdens and anxieties. Your boy, Patrick  
Date: 6/4/2002 9:28:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 34775    who needs beer when you can get drunk on solitude? lol...thank you sweetie  
Date: 6/4/2002 10:34:00 PM  From Authorid: 32070    I like the poem Anabel. yeah, you heard me right.. lol..But you 2 are too mushy!!!! hehe..*hugs*  
Date: 6/4/2002 11:29:00 PM  From Authorid: 37038    powerful work here!!!  
Date: 6/5/2002 6:12:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 34775    Thanks, Alice..powerful seems to be the buzzword here  
Date: 6/5/2002 6:12:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 34775    Hey THANKS, PL!!! And about the mushy stuff...we like that too much, Patrick and I aim to be champions of mush..lol  
Date: 6/5/2002 7:27:00 PM  From Authorid: 21435    Maternal instincts..The title got me. So many things in this poem that I seem to be able to relate to. Had to tell myself to breath a couple of times. "Break the block," indeed. Thank you for the words, Anabel. Write on....  
Date: 6/6/2002 10:09:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 34775    Thank you, Kronk..I love your relation to the maternal instincts! So many times I write things and they mean such a variety of things that it all just runs together in a puddle. Thank you  
Date: 6/8/2002 3:55:00 AM  From Authorid: 4548    your words are a breath of fresh air, an. i totally dig the metaphors  
Date: 6/8/2002 10:39:00 AM  From Authorid: 39179    anabell.....a way u have......u run the gauntlet of extremses........flowers to you  
Date: 6/8/2002 2:51:00 PM  From Authorid: 31255    I get a sense of sadness in this one. You totally amaze me with your writing though. I know with reading your poems I will never find a bad one because you just have your own way of saying things. And still vague enough to hold the crown   
Date: 6/9/2002 2:04:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 34775    Thanks Jez, I am glad that you liked it...one of my "brooder" poems  
Date: 6/9/2002 2:05:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 34775    Thank you Pert, I know extremes well..lol...it seems I am always on one end or the other...thank you, my friend  
Date: 6/9/2002 2:07:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 34775    You know, Toodles, I think that you just gave me one of the best compliments ever...to have one's own way of saying things...that is recognizable...even though vague to many..lol...Thank you very much....  

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