Date: 5/20/2002 8:20:00 PM
From Authorid: 46069
wow!!..i never thought about life being a slow suicide...kurtvedder..thats so depressing....yikes!!..come on KV sing me a song ..a happy one..lol  |
Date: 5/20/2002 8:23:00 PM
From Authorid: 10534
nice little story, i like it. i bet a lot of people who are trying to be comedians or actors or whatever feel bad like this because they don't make it. i dont know what im talkin about...lol keep writing  |
Date: 5/20/2002 8:31:00 PM
From Authorid: 4548
i love the intricate inner dialogue, and the unexpected twist of someone with such dark thoughts getting up to do comedy lol  |
Date: 5/20/2002 8:34:00 PM
From Authorid: 20750
hehhehehehhehehee!!  |
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Date: 5/20/2002 8:46:00 PM
From Authorid: 54723
wow |
Date: 5/21/2002 11:50:00 PM
From Authorid: 20956
clever story KV, interesting twist .....  |
Date: 7/30/2002 12:33:00 AM
From Authorid: 20559
I like that one. The irony twist is great  |
Date: 9/2/2003 9:58:00 PM
From Authorid: 45684
Heh..Good story! Some of the descriptions bordered on cliches (I have a problem with that myself), but I loved them all the same! I especially liked the twist at the end. A comedian with such a dark soul. Whooda thunk it?  |
Date: 9/3/2003 3:34:00 AM
From Authorid: 1799
hmm.. well thats an interesting start... cool   |
Date: 9/3/2003 3:36:00 AM
From Authorid: 1799
oh..lol. nevermind.. i guess thats it..lol. okay, well. cool, Kurt. thanks for sharing it with us.  |
Date: 9/3/2003 9:39:00 AM
From Authorid: 56359
This was great. I really enjoyed the descriptions. And the ending was completly unexpected, I wasn't thinking that at all. Great post!!!-screen_writer-  |
Date: 9/3/2003 10:40:00 AM
From Authorid: 62222
Hmmm, life as a dark comedy gig? Oh, I like it Kurt...alot. I can see how someone might not have looked very hard at it, but I think I found alot of my own feelings in those sparse words. Especially the inference to even though you know a bomb is dangerous, as long as you don't light the fuse you are okay? You have some REAL talent hidden in the guise of rambling. Clever, clever boy! <RegretfulHalo>  |
Date: 9/3/2003 7:38:00 PM
From Authorid: 36994
I like the comparisons you make, like a ticking time bob, and commiting a slow suicide Wonderful work,  |
Date: 9/4/2003 3:34:00 AM
From Authorid: 55386
I just...don't have any idea of what to say. I'll try though. Your description, and all the metaphores you used really made this such an amazing read! I loved it, and I love the way your portrayed it all. You have me wondering how many people actually do feel this way. This was just great though. Really good post. Great job and keep writing!  |
45630 Category:(Fiction) Created:(5/20/2002 8:16:00 PM)