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Date: 5/19/2002 12:54:00 AM
From Authorid: 54570
It makes me think of my ex-girlfriend and what she did to me while I was in the hospital. Gotta call my lawyer in the morning hmm. But keep on writing it did stir something inside  |
Date: 5/19/2002 1:10:00 AM
From Authorid: 51684
This reminds me of something very painful that happened to me. Thanks for sharing...it felt good to release some of that.  ~Charisma K.~  |
Date: 5/19/2002 1:27:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 54808
glad too help, hope that they wern't too painful, and hope u feel better soon  |
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Date: 5/19/2002 2:39:00 AM
From Authorid: 51684
BTW, are you new to USM? ~Charisma K.~ |
Date: 5/19/2002 2:47:00 AM
From Authorid: 28946
This was beautiful and brought a tear to my eyes. I have wrote in my journals about this very thing. Great poem and thank you for sharing it.  |
| Date: 5/19/2002 3:51:00 AM From Authorid: 54632 wow, this is really beautiful. ~2Bizzy~ |
Date: 5/19/2002 7:21:00 AM
From Authorid: 46515
I thought it was beautiful.  |
Date: 5/19/2002 7:26:00 AM
From Authorid: 25828
i like the poem, craftsmanship wise it flows nicely. i don't feel good after reading it though, like i should be trying to help someone not commit suicide or something. 8-(, since you asked....  |
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Date: 5/19/2002 3:59:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 54808
thanks 4 your replies eah i like agree on that one, and yes im new here at USM |
Date: 11/15/2002 5:03:00 PM
From Authorid: 28363
I think this is fine work  |
Date: 1/16/2003 6:27:00 PM
From Authorid: 37150
thank you for sharing this. it sounds like an epiphany for someone's funeral or something. it's very true. it made me think of my uncle who has passed on. this would be a good poem for my aunt and my cousins. well all my fam.  |
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