24 hours of murder (7am to 8am)

it is now 7:00 tom had called his brother at 6:55 to come .tom was on the floor crying. him and his dad were veary close . tom began to think what kind of person is this to kill so many people tom had to leve at 7:20 to get to the cremitary .then he herd a noise hello who is it tom had gotten a gun .tom said i have a gun whos there .then out of the shadows a man came tom tried to shoot but the man said stop its me ray your brother.ray tom said cryinging dads been killed tom fell to the floor .i cant take any more .ray began to cry .tom said i have to go .where ray asked.i cant tell you .where ray asked. look tom said illbe back .tom im going to call the police .why tom asked you think i killed dad well i DID NOT!!! tom screamed im going .tom left and went to the cemetary.tom was at the cematary hello he scremed any one here its me im here im not scared of you . hello .then blood came at him then abodie feel then tom hered police sirens he was trapped the killer set a tarp....to be countinude...next 8am to 9am

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