Date: 4/23/2002 8:23:00 PM
From Authorid: 20750
Well if you have chores you do add those! Or is there is a memory of your mom all dressed up & looking beautiful add that! Or a very special memory you have of her, add that to!! I like your poem just the way it is!! Just add more personal stuff as you go along! Good job!  |
Date: 4/23/2002 8:43:00 PM
From Authorid: 24924
"So many Mommie and Daughter memories through the years........the kissed boo-boo's and drying of tears. You gave me hope; you dared me to dream and ignore stormy weather..........You and I, dear mommie, that bond will last forever. Your many memories on my little page are special and rare, and no matter where I go in life, Dear Mommie, I KNOW you'll always be there."  |
Date: 4/24/2002 2:48:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 36779
WoW Thinker that's great!! Thankz so much!!!  |
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Date: 4/24/2002 2:48:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 36779
Thanks for the GREAT tips Moonie! I'll my great memories are coming back to me!! Hehehe!! |
Date: 4/24/2002 8:53:00 PM
From Authorid: 26227
LOL yeah you do go on and on and on. how about this.....Your old as dirt....this this you know.....and he peed his pants....LMAO ohh man I funny  |
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Date: 4/25/2002 7:30:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 36779
Ummm Yeah 1/2baked I think I'll use that one... Yea... Oh and I love the ending! :P |
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Date: 4/25/2002 1:33:00 PM
From Authorid: 26227
I know thats why I put it there!!!! And he peed his pants is always a great ending!!! |
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Date: 4/26/2002 2:00:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 36779
Yea famous authors should always use it has their last sentence in a book... |
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Date: 4/26/2002 7:11:00 PM
From Authorid: 26227
I know it.....all of there books would be best sellers right away then |
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Date: 4/26/2002 7:34:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 36779
Yea *COUGH* *COUGH* sureeeee |
