Date: 3/30/2002 4:43:00 PM
From Authorid: 35042
Beautiful Anabel, loved it... seems to be dark ending or is it just me?  |
Date: 3/30/2002 4:48:00 PM
From Authorid: 14780
awww...what a great poem...so much emotion and depth..Lots of Love  |
Date: 3/30/2002 4:56:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 34775
Thank you TSK..I suppose it could be dark..but not necessarily...I was more going for a light shower than a thunderstorm...lol... ~  |
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Date: 3/30/2002 4:58:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 34775
Thanks Katsho...I am glad that you enjoyed it~ |
Date: 3/30/2002 5:04:00 PM
From Authorid: 42792
This is gorgeous. What else can be said? It is just so beautiful.  |
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Date: 3/30/2002 5:45:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 34775
Thank you NKA, for your wonderful comments...they are very much appreciated~ |
Date: 3/30/2002 5:59:00 PM
From Authorid: 46091
Baby, that is wonderfully fragmented in its depth. The images in your mind are so vivid and exciting. You are my favorite poet of all time I love you baby, Patrick  |
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Date: 3/30/2002 6:06:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 34775
Awwww...of all time??? Such lofty praise, I am probably not worthy of...maybe you are a bit biased? lol! Your praise means the world...love~ |
Date: 3/31/2002 6:29:00 AM
From Authorid: 33286
driftwood and feathers,, Rokk on Anabel...   |
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Date: 3/31/2002 8:48:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 34775
Lol..oh I will never stop, you know that! Thank you , Tim...~ |
Date: 3/31/2002 8:21:00 PM
From Authorid: 21435
"They" told me that it was the deepest river in the world..I don't know about that..But it was..deep. Standing on the railroad bridge and watching tall sycamores going end over end in the current. Charms on a bracelet...Yes..So many flashing through my head. I have an Aunt Bel, you know. Never wed. Still alive and talking at 95. good as gold. I still have the silver that she gave as a wedding present. She took mother in when times were hard..so long ago. I saw her wrist and the charms...Bolt upright last night at 0200. Thought that one landed in the back yard....Anabel. Your words just set me off. When nothing comes, I'll shut the mind and open the heart. Thank you, my friend...Write on....  |
Date: 3/31/2002 11:17:00 PM
From Authorid: 44404
"and still the song remands the same...." brings piece to my mind in the summertime. let the summertime roll. nice annie.  |
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Date: 4/1/2002 7:04:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 34775
Kronk, I grew up on a lake..actually, the same one that Minnow did...one summer day I was sitting on the dock with my feet in the water...just passing time...trying to get away from the parents, like most 15 year old girls want to....I use to always wear ankle bracelets...and the shining of it must have attracted the "freshwater shark"...one of the few toothy menacing muskies that inhabited are small lake....it was scarred and old looking and scared the life out of me and I could only sit motionless while it circled aound and glided right underneath my feet....I could feel it's fin's touch the bottom of my feet...I was lucky I didn't lose a few toes...I had a great charm bracelet that my mom gave me...the one I remember most was 2 hearts with an arrow through them...connected by hat arrow...thank you for your comments...I look forward to them always~ |
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Date: 4/1/2002 7:05:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 34775
Let the good times roll. Minnow...lol...ahhh...the summer...someone throw a tire on that fire...let's see if we can stop that train...~ |
Date: 4/1/2002 2:01:00 PM
From Authorid: 28363
I used to have a tri-level chess set, this is very nice work.  |
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Date: 4/1/2002 2:05:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 34775
Well then, that MUST mean that you think in the third level..or many more, Donno...lol! Thank you, sweetie!!~ |
Date: 4/4/2002 1:36:00 PM
From Authorid: 39179
Poised.....but for what?......imagery is startling here belle......nice...  |
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Date: 4/4/2002 2:01:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 34775
That, Pert...i do not know...I just have to be ready for something...I know that much... |
