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Date: 3/23/2002 5:51:00 PM From Authorid: 49889 God, I never thought about the hazards of being a barbie doll!!!! VERY WELL WRITTEN ~FieryAngel~ |
Date: 3/23/2002 5:52:00 PM From Authorid: 48472 I don't pretend to be very smart (anyone who knows me is aware of this) but reading this I got the feeling of what it's all really about. The words from the heart, the words of love. They call to you in a tune that needs no words. thats what poetry is, words that mean something, words from the heart. maybe i am wrong completely, but thats what i felt, and I loved it. |
Date: 3/23/2002 5:54:00 PM
From Authorid: 51061
well i liked it but i am going to have to say umm.. well different lol. No i'm kidding it was realy good i've just nver heard any one give a doll so many deeo thoughts lol Keep it up though ------Guy |
Date: 3/23/2002 5:57:00 PM From Authorid: 46091 Directed towards anybody in particular, babe? rofl. "Poets that bleed, like they're twisting their fresh hearts on a juicer"??? Ick, I hate pulp! You know what your angst does to me... hehe. Love you, Patrick |
Date: 3/23/2002 6:02:00 PM ( From Author ) From Authorid: 34775 Firey Angel...thank you...some people are plastic like dolls is all I am saying...leave it to me to draw it out in some long form poetry...I am glad that you enjoyed it~ |
Date: 3/23/2002 6:06:00 PM ( From Author ) From Authorid: 34775 SYW, gee..thanks for the lesson in depth! Actually this is sort of a tirade against "plastic poets"...you know....those people that write for hallmark...I think that poetry has to be genuine and not copied....it can be fluff, but it has to be fluff from the heart. You got it right though, it is about love...love of creating with words...it is such a passionate and driving force. I am glad to make your aquaintance....thank you very much for your thought out reply~ |
Date: 3/23/2002 6:13:00 PM ( From Author ) From Authorid: 34775 Guy....oh it's just me and my extended metaphors at work again...*sigh* I just can't get around them...lol...barbies can't actually write you know, their fingers are fused together and they couldn't hold a pen....lol! |
Date: 3/23/2002 6:15:00 PM ( From Author ) From Authorid: 34775 Hey baby...my angst does something to you? I wonder what that could be? I thought I was the one that found angst attractive...hehee...yes...I agree...I prefer pulpless, myself...oh, and I love you...~ |
Date: 3/23/2002 6:20:00 PM From Authorid: 46091 Angst... Candle rituals... bug smashing (especially scorpions)... the list is endless. I Love You, Patrick |
Date: 3/23/2002 6:25:00 PM ( From Author ) From Authorid: 34775 You make me blush...let me at those bad, bad scorpions.... |
Date: 3/23/2002 6:27:00 PM From Authorid: 51707 omg,that is very cool,,thanks for sharing*lil_princess* |
Date: 3/23/2002 6:35:00 PM ( From Author ) From Authorid: 34775 OMG..lol...thank you lil princess...~ |
Date: 3/23/2002 6:51:00 PM From Authorid: 31255 wow anabel! I really like the images in this one I always know I will never find a bad poem from you. *hugs* |
Date: 3/23/2002 6:55:00 PM ( From Author ) From Authorid: 34775 Oh..lol...Toodles..I am sure there are a few lemons in the bunch..lol..but it is always wonderful to see you and hear what you have to say...thank you so much for the compliment~ |
Date: 3/23/2002 7:16:00 PM From Authorid: 33286 hides behind G.I.Joe with kung-fu grip,,,great poem Annie dear.....lololol |
Date: 3/23/2002 7:20:00 PM ( From Author ) From Authorid: 34775 LMAO@Tim!!!!!!! Don't me whip out my He-Man action figure! Or my WWF thumbwrestlers....~ |
Date: 3/23/2002 7:21:00 PM From Authorid: 33286 transformers... robots in disguise |
Date: 3/23/2002 7:25:00 PM ( From Author ) From Authorid: 34775 OMG!!!!! LMAO...yeah...how appropriate...~ |
Date: 3/24/2002 3:57:00 AM From Authorid: 28363 LOL, this is smashing, I wish they would too-- it would bring up the collective poetic IQ on usm rotf *hugs* |
Date: 3/24/2002 12:03:00 PM ( From Author ) From Authorid: 34775 Thanks Donnno....I am honored with the compliment and glad that you like it heheee |
Date: 3/24/2002 12:19:00 PM From Authorid: 10534 This is a great poem! I loved it, thanks for sharing |
Date: 3/24/2002 1:44:00 PM ( From Author ) From Authorid: 34775 Thanks Icy Fire....glad you liked it~ |
Date: 3/24/2002 3:08:00 PM From Authorid: 4548 lol prolific! thoughtless, meaningless words strewn insequentially about, ugh, i can't bear it! inflict your nothingless elsewhere, please |
Date: 3/24/2002 3:15:00 PM ( From Author ) From Authorid: 34775 LMAO..you got it sista...heheee...just a little vent, here |
Date: 3/24/2002 9:55:00 PM From Authorid: 21435 Valley of the Dolls...Looking for the big bad doll momma..Barbie lived next door to me..I sat in a red ant hill, trying to get her attention..Her daughter went on to be crowned "Miss America."..Turned out that she was only human afterall..Snow White with an attitude, my friend..It looks good on you to..lol..Rokkin poetry Anabel. They're undoubtedly quaking in their little pink, plastic shoes..Write on.... |
Date: 3/25/2002 6:01:00 AM ( From Author ) From Authorid: 34775 Kronk...I forgot to mention the Ken doll, as well. Obviously the envy of many a mortal man...but really, they don't have much to offer...they can't hug well with their plastic, unbending arms...call this a bit of "angry girl" poetry...got to spread the bit of angst around...thank you, Kronk...you are a rokkin guy, you are!~ |
Date: 3/25/2002 7:11:00 AM From Authorid: 39179 good lord......my ears are ringing..yet no sound do i hear.....must be the resonace of the soul you found |
Date: 3/25/2002 7:44:00 AM ( From Author ) From Authorid: 34775 Whew...thanks Pert...I am glad you heard that loud and clear...all of the truly poetic souls need to hear it once and awhile Thank you ~ |
Date: 3/27/2002 4:31:00 PM From Authorid: 39179 belle.......that one was waaaaay good |
Date: 3/27/2002 6:40:00 PM ( From Author ) From Authorid: 34775 wowee...thanks bunches...plastic people shouldn't write...that's all I have to say about that...hehee |
Date: 3/28/2002 10:25:00 AM From Authorid: 44404 that was awesome. very so.......awesome. you make me smile in humbleness. |
Date: 3/28/2002 11:43:00 AM ( From Author ) From Authorid: 34775 Great Scott! Lol..I have never managed THAT one before, Carl...you humble guy, you!!! Thanks a tonnage!! |
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