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ME MINUS YOU,,,,,ALICENCHAINS

  Author:  37038  Category:(Poetry) Created:(3/15/2002 12:57:00 AM)
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i saved you in my heart far to long
it left me decaying, from the strong
i cant begin, to find my self
who am i with out you?
choking on my own air
you go on, with out a care

past shadows take my hand
lingering thoughts of you
still stand
must i wake alone
and my dreams, turn to stone
forever still, an empty fill

the burden of these chains
are heavy
the mind and the heart bare to much
weight
your power over me still great

loving you has made me weak
and now its at its peak
i must crawl out of these depths
scratching, and bleeding
and set you free from my heart
where you have made your self
so comfortable, then died






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Date: 3/15/2002 1:18:00 AM  From Authorid: 26975    Brava! Cunning, Mysterious, Quiet yet passionate, you truly have the components neccessary for such a writer. I truly become humbled at your writings. Continue to enlighten us please.  
Date: 3/15/2002 1:44:00 AM  From Authorid: 35042    Ann I have been missing your poetry over the past few months - more because I haven't seen it rather than you stopping I think, but nevertheless... Another poem with lots of darkness and shadow - the shadow being there due to some glimmers of light shining through. Beautiful  
Date: 3/15/2002 2:07:00 AM  From Authorid: 35231    OH POOP! THis is soo cool. Its awesome! U are a wonderful poet. If i had talent like u i'd be a millionare!   
Date: 3/15/2002 2:09:00 AM  From Authorid: 30229    Wow, Ann honey, this is GREAT... I have to agree with every single word Dark Sadness said.. it is so true You are the best huggggggs.....  
Date: 3/15/2002 5:00:00 AM  From Authorid: 28363    This is great  
Date: 3/15/2002 7:32:00 AM  From Authorid: 40304    Great poem Ann, as usual Im delighted reading such pain in your words that reflect my own...Love....  
Date: 3/15/2002 8:31:00 AM  From Authorid: 45446    This poem is great! Like so many of your other ones.  
Date: 3/15/2002 8:36:00 AM  From Authorid: 47538    ALICENCHAINS this is a great poem, thank you for sharing.  
Date: 3/15/2002 10:24:00 AM  From Authorid: 46494    good poem.  
Date: 3/16/2002 7:15:00 PM  From Authorid: 44018    I hate short comments .... MichaelSalyers
Date: 3/16/2002 7:25:00 PM  From Authorid: 44018    LOL ... Sorry , sometimes I follow what everyonbe else is doing LMAO ....
I really do love this poem although a bit haunting , very hurtful and , a bit tourmenting it is a very good poem . Right now all I can think of after reading this , is the one who got away and the wonder of how many others may have ever thought of ME as the one who got away . Splendid imagery to the reader although they may not like what they see this peace does as it should , it took a weight off of you when you wrote it in an odd way , and gave all who have basked in it a taste of themselves and your creative soul .... MichaelSalyers
Date: 3/16/2002 11:17:00 PM  From Authorid: 31255    Aw Dear Thorny Pupil Woman, LOL did I say I would stop referring to your own lines? LOL sorry couldn't help it! LOL I totally loved this poem though, especially the last few lines. A perfect image of struggle great job! *hugs*  
Date: 5/17/2005 6:29:00 PM  From Authorid: 51292    Wonderful poetry, awesome writing!! Very nice, thanks for sharing your work!! 80)  

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