Date: 1/27/2002 10:21:00 PM
From Authorid: 20750
wowser cool poem Grammy but what's a blue bottle??? |
Date: 1/27/2002 10:24:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42945
its a pale blue jelly like sea creature with very long tentacles and these tentacles wrap around your legs and the pain is like nothing on earth, but fortunately they dont come into shore all that often, the pale blue body of it is transparent, okkkkk ....thanx for reading this...cheers grammy |
Date: 1/27/2002 10:32:00 PM
From Authorid: 20750
OMG!!!ewwwwwwwwwww!!! I would not like those creatures!!! |
Date: 1/27/2002 10:34:00 PM
From Authorid: 12341
I love this!!! The ocean is my most favorite place in the world, any beach, any ocean, I love it! Great poem! |
Date: 1/27/2002 11:17:00 PM
From Authorid: 33922
You write very descriptive Poetry...Very Good Job..I greaatly enjoyed this |
Date: 1/28/2002 1:13:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42945
yes but Moonie you would love the beach and you dont encounter these blue bottles very often...cheers grammy |
Date: 1/28/2002 1:14:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42945
thanx ShadowGhost I love the beaches also thanx for your comment...cheers Zema |
Date: 1/28/2002 1:15:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42945
and thank you TX for reading this and I'm glad you enjoyed it....cheers Zema |
Date: 1/28/2002 2:56:00 AM
From Authorid: 47242
I enjoyed reading this. I have never been to a beach but it sounds so relaxing. trauna mama |
Date: 1/28/2002 5:39:00 AM
From Authorid: 47930
OMG zeplin i felt like i was there. great poem i am bookmarking it...hugs...midnight momma |
Date: 1/28/2002 2:37:00 PM
From Authorid: 47538
I enjoyed reading this poem Zema, Great job. ~~~TORI |
Date: 1/28/2002 2:52:00 PM
From Authorid: 49311
great poem i really enjoyed it good job zeplin...midnight daddy |
Date: 1/28/2002 6:44:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42945
thanx to Trauma Moma, midnight momma, midnight daddy and TORI for your lovely comments, glad you enjoyed it....cheers Zema |
Date: 1/29/2002 3:56:00 PM
From Authorid: 40290
I love the beach, it is so peaceful. The ocean holds so much magic. This is a beautiful poem. Thanks so much for sharing it |
Date: 1/29/2002 7:08:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 42945
than you Mystic Lady for taking the time to read this...cheers Zema |