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The girl by shaggyshoe ( a werid twist)

  Author:  26649  Category:(Horror) Created:(1/27/2002 6:00:00 PM)
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The girl

There was a girl named Athena. She was a strange girl. She didn't have any friends but her twin sister Haley. But she didn't play with her. One day Athena was in the woods looking for her dad when she came across something she never saw before. She saw a house but not any kind of house but a strange one.

It had strange things on the out side like dead bats and rats. It even had a picture of her on it. She didn't even know this house was here, so how did they get a picture of herself . She asked her self when she saw it. So she decide to go and knock on the door. So she did and what she saw frighten her.

Know what she she saw she could not be live . In the front yard on the ground was a body of a man .Athena was shocked because the man looked like her father , so she walked closer and closer to the front door and when she got to front porch to ring the door bell, the door opened.

There she saw a lady with a hump on her back ,and she asked who she was. The lady said her name was Sara. Athena asked why that body of the man was there, the lady answered with a sigh and said come in. The lady went in the back and came back as Haley. Athena was very shocked to see her.

She asked where was the old lady at ,Haley said that she was the old lady and that she put her picture out side to get her attetion. Then Athena asked again why the body of the dead guy was out there her sister started to cry but stop and then she started her story.

She said that she came to the woods with her father because he wanted her to. So she came with him. All of sudden he made her go to this house and was going to make her stay there but she didn't know why. As he told her she wouldn't be able to open the door once it shut, until your sister comes to free you. So the story went on. All of sudden again the sister got an idea she found a knife and killed her father with and right when she went to go get something out of the house the door shut on her. The father shut the door right when he fall to the ground.

From that day on Athena visited that house every day to find out more stuff that happened and made a new friend in the process.

How it changed my life:

i learned nothing but it takes time to write something like this..

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Date: 1/27/2002 6:01:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 26649    it might seem strange at first but i tried my best know guys  
Date: 1/27/2002 6:09:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 26649    what do u guys think about my story i wrote?  
Date: 1/28/2002 3:17:00 PM  From Authorid: 45897    its kinda confusing a bit, but its ok. but why did she visit that house? she rescued her sister already. adn how did the sister turn to the old lady. is the sister haley?  
Date: 1/30/2002 11:48:00 AM  From Authorid: 48128    Hmmm... It was good but some of it was kinda confusing. I liked the story but you need to change a few things in it. Thanks for shareing it with us  
Date: 1/30/2002 5:00:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 26649    sorry  
Date: 2/15/2002 4:11:00 PM  From Authorid: 11341    the only thing that confuses me is why she killed her dad. i for one think i was a good story   

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