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"This Will Make You Cry"..Or at least make ya think twice..

  Author:  8453  Category:(Interesting) Created:(1/24/2002 8:48:00 PM)
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I got this in an email from a friend..very sad little "realistic, eye-opening" story..:o(

"This Will Make You Cry..."



Jenny was so happy about the house they had found.



For once in her life it was on the right side of town.



She unpacked her things with such great ease.



As she watched her new curtains blow in the breeze.



How wonderful it was to have her own room.



School would be starting; she'd have friends over soon.



There'd be sleep-overs, and parties; she was so happy



It's just the way she wanted her life to be.



On the first day of school, everything went great.



She made new friends and even got a date!



She thought, "I want to be popular and I'm going to be,



Because I just got a date with the star of the team!"



To be known in this school you had to have a clout,



And dating this guy would sure help her out.



There was only one problem stopping her fate.



Her parents had said she was too young to date.



"Well, I just won't tell them the entire truth.



They won't know the difference; what's there to lose?"



Jenny asked to stay with her friends that night.



Her parents frowned but said, "All right."



Excited, she got ready for the big event



But as she rushed around like she had no sense,



She began to feel guilty about all the lies,



But what's a pizza, a party, and a moonlight ride?



Well the pizza was good, and the party was great, But the



moonlight ride would have to wait.



For Jeff was half drunk by this time.



She felt someone remove her from the twisted rubble,



And heard, "call an ambulance! These kids are in trouble!



Voices she heard...a few words at best.



But she knew there were two cars involved in the wreck.



Then wondered to herself if Jeff was all right,



And if the people in the other car was alive.



She awoke in the hospital to faces so sad.



"You've been in a wreck and it looks pretty bad."



These voices echoed inside her head,



As they gently told her that Jeff was dead.



They said "Jenny, we've done all we can do.



But it looks as if we'll lose you too."



"But the people in the other car!? "Jenny cried.



"We're sorry, Jenny, they also died."



Jenny prayed, "God, forgive me for what I've done



I only wanted to have just one night of fun."



"Tell those people's family, I've made their lives dim,



And wish I could return their families to them."



"Tell Mom and Dad I'm sorry I lied,



And that it's my fault so many have died.



Oh, nurse, won't you please tell them that for me?"



The nurse just stood there-she never agreed.



But took Jenny's hand with tears in her eyes.



And a few moments later Jenny died.



A man asked the nurse, "Why didn't you do your best



To bid that girl her one last request?"



She looked at the man with eyes so sad.



"Because the people in the other car were her mom and dad."

How it changed my life:

makes ya think twice about drinking and driving..also about gut feelings and how lying can effect your life..:o(

~*~*~MetalGoddess~*~*~

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Date: 1/24/2002 8:54:00 PM  From Authorid: 24003    I have read this before..its so sad  
Date: 1/24/2002 8:54:00 PM  From Authorid: 6050    OMG!!!!! excellently written...wow..how astonishingly sad..whoa!  
Date: 1/24/2002 8:56:00 PM  From Authorid: 47588    OMG...You're right. It did make me cry. Thank you for posting this for us to read. Brenae  
Date: 1/24/2002 8:56:00 PM  From Authorid: 42792    that gave me goosebumps...and tears are forming too. it does make you think but it is traumatizing  
Date: 1/24/2002 9:02:00 PM  From Authorid: 6731    You made me cry. That's the second time tonight someone here has shared something that made me cry. Thanks for sharing though. *hugs*  
Date: 1/24/2002 9:04:00 PM  From Authorid: 43948    Yeh Drinking and driving here are under strict rules here. I dunno. Whatever.  
Date: 1/24/2002 9:06:00 PM  From Authorid: 26203    omg what can I say this has really left me speechless Goosebumps too..love koala  
Date: 1/24/2002 9:48:00 PM  From Authorid: 42945    oh MetalGoddess this is an excellent post, and you were right I did feel like crying, thanx for sharing...cheers  
Date: 1/24/2002 9:50:00 PM  From Authorid: 11593    Metal Goddess, I was just thinking about this poem yesterday, and I was trying to find it because someone has already posted on this website, but thanks for sharing anyway!  
Date: 1/24/2002 9:52:00 PM  From Authorid: 11593    I just found it. Phantom Crow Author ID: 8905 posted "Midnight Ride". Just to give them a little credit.  
Date: 1/24/2002 11:07:00 PM  From Authorid: 14677    Wow that is so sad

  
Date: 1/24/2002 11:28:00 PM  From Authorid: 22938    In the town i live in they(the clubs) and or (bars)pay the city off... And you know everyone's drivin' intoxicated from the club and the bars.. I don't think it's a good idea... because i've seen to many "almost" accidents...
Date: 1/25/2002 1:19:00 AM  From Authorid: 45948    OMG, that is so sad! Thank you for posting it. Bookmarked! ~~Angeleyez~~  
Date: 1/25/2002 3:18:00 AM  From Authorid: 48769    Great post MetalGoddess. Makes one think what one little lie can do to change so many lives. Thanks for reposting it. OrionSky  
Date: 1/25/2002 4:28:00 AM  From Authorid: 30229    Metal Goddess ... I got that in email a long time ago, and I cried when I read it. Reading it here once again made me cry too. I think this story should be reposted at times as a reminder that when mixing alcohol with driving the results can be disasterous.. Thank you so much for posting this... Huge huggggggs.......  
Date: 1/26/2002 4:46:00 PM  From Authorid: 39370    Oh this i so sad . But it makes a good point....  
Date: 1/11/2007 12:40:00 AM  From Authorid: 53558    This story makes me cry..It's so very sad...  
Date: 1/29/2009 5:14:00 PM  From Authorid: 23101    Oh my gosh! This is so sad   

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