Date: 12/19/2001 9:25:00 PM
From Authorid: 33286
mmmm, life as a river, sometimes we paddle, sometimes we drift, either way it is a journey, wonderful poem Ann,  |
Date: 12/19/2001 9:53:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 34775
hmmmm..now that is odd, the first reply to the comment that you left disappeared...maybe it is out there somewhere in the stratosphere...lol, moving on....thank you, Hack, dear, for your encouragement...as always...~  |
Date: 12/19/2001 10:02:00 PM
From Authorid: 31255
I like this one! Something about the way we live our lives and play around with it just seems so apparent in this poem. The last few lines just bring a lil laugh because its the teasing life that brings the child out again  At least thats kinda how I saw it in this. *hugs*  |
Date: 12/19/2001 10:13:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 34775
Toodles, I love it when someone gets sometihing out of my writng..lol..reading me....I am really glad that you liked this...I think of this as something that we are guilty of at times.....I borrow the expression from my mom, "dancing all around the fire"...that is what this is, reallystepping up to the line, but not crossing over it...I like your summation of it..thank you again.... ~ |
Date: 12/19/2001 10:34:00 PM
From Authorid: 44924
i so understand this peom *sexyangel*  |
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Date: 12/20/2001 5:57:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 34775
Thanks...glad you got something out of it... |
Date: 12/20/2001 1:19:00 PM
From Authorid: 21435
The mind never sleeps, they say so. I think that may be true. Once moved as such, the thing never forgets. Caught in the rip-tide. Fight the flow and drowning is always a possiblity. Hiya Anabel. Your words "drew it out of me." Whatever it is, it feels good now. Thanks for the words. Loving it as usual..See ya and write on....  |
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Date: 12/20/2001 9:32:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 34775
Kronk, I am into the "riptide"...my mind never sleeps I wish it would....living on a good 3 hours sleep most nights..there is too much to think about....too many pictures in my head..and daydreams.....too many daydreams for me to ever sleep...~ |
