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Carrion, My Wayward Son.................(dark)..................Hack

  Author:  33286  Category:(Poetry) Created:(9/25/2001 6:38:00 PM)
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standing atop a pile of bones,
mountains crumbled at my feet.
I cast my eyes to my grizly throne,
dust it off and take my seat.

surrounded by death that teems with life.
maggots, a carpet that writhes and heaves.
rythmic waves, relaxing and nice,
bodies lay scattered like windblown leaves.

shatterer of worlds alone in the night,
Shiva returned in an earthly guise.
I live to taste the end of the fight,
life itself is what I despise.

so come my children,, come to me.
please don't make me hunt you down.
I'll show you the last sight you'll ever see,
your life draining uselessly into the ground.

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Date: 9/25/2001 6:41:00 PM  From Authorid: 33925    OMG! Dark is not the word for this one Hack...this is creepy!! LOL...@}----xoxo  
Date: 9/25/2001 6:43:00 PM  From Authorid: 30630    Wow Hack, This one sent chills down my spine. Good one. *HUGS*  
Date: 9/25/2001 6:49:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 33286    hehehehehe,,, thanks Lady,,, lol glad you....liked.... it...lol  
Date: 9/25/2001 6:50:00 PM  From Authorid: 32070    I read the title wrong. I thought you were gonna get me singing again! Your right, it is dark. *hugs*  
Date: 9/25/2001 6:53:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 33286    hehehe,, thanks stormy... glad you liked it  
Date: 9/25/2001 6:54:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 33286    lmao,, no P.L. I knew what I was doing this time...lol... thanks, I like the dark  
Date: 9/25/2001 6:56:00 PM  From Authorid: 37584    good poem hack  
Date: 9/25/2001 7:02:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 33286    thanks Tonya...lol... a little different ....hehehehe  
Date: 9/25/2001 7:14:00 PM  From Authorid: 11528    Hi Hack, rough day at work perhaps, this isnt Your usual style. hehehhe Bye for now my friend. Enki  
Date: 9/25/2001 7:18:00 PM  From Authorid: 13985    See you had me singing that song. it was a good poem.. but i was expecting the song.. great poem tho.  
Date: 9/25/2001 7:20:00 PM  From Authorid: 42908    find the cost of freedom....buried in the ground. mother earth will nourish you...lay your body down. hi hack. love, meru
Date: 9/25/2001 7:25:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 33286    lol,, actually started coming up with it on my way to work...lol,, glad you liked it  
Date: 9/25/2001 7:26:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 33286    lol,, snapple,, the title is different... glad you liked it  
Date: 9/25/2001 7:26:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 33286    meru,, HI!!! glad you liked it   
Date: 9/25/2001 7:33:00 PM  From Authorid: 37038    omy hack you are evil!!! hehehe freaky poem very cool love it book marked!!  
Date: 9/25/2001 7:41:00 PM  From Authorid: 40290    Wow, what a scary poem. lol, like everyone else I now have that song in my head. Carry on my wayward son, there be peace when you are done, lay your weary head to rest don't you cry no more. LOL ~Mysticlady  
Date: 9/25/2001 7:50:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 33286    lol, thanks Ann,, yeah, a little freaky, glad you liked it....  
Date: 9/25/2001 7:51:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 33286    I know Mysticlady,, but you know what other song is in my mind,,,, dust in the wind,, all we are is dust in the wind... glad you liked it,, thank you  
Date: 9/25/2001 7:51:00 PM  From Authorid: 41847    that poem had alot of feeling to it, King Spawn  
Date: 9/25/2001 7:56:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 33286    lol,,um, ok... thanks King Spawn, it was a little dark, but I like all styles  
Date: 9/25/2001 8:52:00 PM  From Authorid: 20750    Hackie lay down!!!! I'll light a candel for ya!!! wait I need to get the holy water!!! BRB!!!  
Date: 9/25/2001 9:09:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 33286    LMAO...moooonie,, not the holy water,, it burns,, it burns!!!!  
Date: 9/26/2001 10:16:00 AM  From Authorid: 34775    lol..between THIS and your Midas touch, you are beginning to freak me out..LMAO!!!  
Date: 9/26/2001 5:21:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 33286    hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe  
Date: 9/26/2001 9:41:00 PM  From Authorid: 21266    ok what did i eva eva eva do 2 u so ic an witness this poem??? im too young to err..shudda hehehehe this poem was awesome!!! and cweepy..
-AHD
  
Date: 9/26/2001 9:42:00 PM  From Authorid: 21266    p.s im using the last verse on my younger bro's ans sis hehehe
thanks lmao
-AHD
  
Date: 9/27/2001 5:54:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 33286    lmao,,, Abszy,, glad I could help.....hehehehe  
Date: 9/29/2001 5:35:00 PM  From Authorid: 21867    Yo Timbro,
Oh...this is delicious bro...I love it...Mmmmmmmm...can almost taste the blood of battle now. Yummy! Peace,
  
Date: 9/29/2001 5:56:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 33286    lolol,,, just a leeeeetle dark man....lmao  
Date: 9/29/2001 9:34:00 PM  From Authorid: 34301    Tim, This is a truely beautiful poem. (Does that make me weird?) This is amazing. Sonya
Date: 9/29/2001 9:36:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 33286    I don't know if that makes you weird,,, it is one of mine that I am most proud of.. I am happy you liked it,, thank you very much  
Date: 11/10/2001 7:31:00 PM  From Authorid: 32086    You blew me away... Awe doesn't describe it, Hack. You had me in tears after the first stanza. You should be soooooo proud of this!  
Date: 11/10/2001 7:33:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 33286    lol,, strange that this one would apeal to you...lmao,,, thank you very much, I am proud of this one  
Date: 11/12/2001 8:55:00 AM  From Authorid: 46527    Oh this is great.......Brilliant! La Sorcière Rouge!  
Date: 11/12/2001 8:59:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 33286    thank you so much,, like I said I am happy with this one,, glad you enjoyed it  
Date: 11/14/2001 8:14:00 PM  From Authorid: 35629    Oh oh very dark indeed i like it.  
Date: 11/14/2001 8:28:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 33286    hehehe,,, thought that YOU would,,, thanks  
Date: 1/19/2002 6:00:00 PM  From Authorid: 16376    that was dark and good!  
Date: 1/19/2002 6:20:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 33286    hehehe,, it is one of my faves Danielle,, thanks  
Date: 7/24/2002 6:00:00 PM  From Authorid: 53836    yummy!! hehe! me likes the dark, Hackie ~SpaceCase  
Date: 7/24/2002 6:22:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 33286    lol, thanks   
Date: 9/18/2003 4:56:00 PM  From Authorid: 62222    Oh, I love the play of that song, I am sure not a lot of people caught that. This poem makes me think of how terrifying the madness of a god would be. I've got chills and I love them. <RegretfulHalo>  
Date: 9/18/2003 4:58:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 33286     thanks so much, I kind of figured you would catch the rhythm,  
Date: 10/18/2008 5:41:00 PM  From Authorid: 10657    I could have done without the maggots image Good thing I wasn't stuffing my face or me and the White God would've been meeting lol I love your expressive writing style though  

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