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Date: 9/23/2001 4:09:00 PM
From Authorid: 30229
Great poem, Enchantress... thanks for sharing...  |
| Date: 9/23/2001 4:17:00 PM From Authorid: 39902 Good poem, deep, yet sad. Kind of made me sleepy, oddly enough. - killer'N'black |
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Date: 9/23/2001 4:41:00 PM
From Authorid: 37038
ooooooowow this was so amazing!!!! the somber tone flows so beautifuly, it grabs the soul great job!!   |
Date: 9/23/2001 6:08:00 PM
From Authorid: 21435
Hey Enchantress. This is a lovely poem. Such feeling, I enjoyed it. Thanks for the words. Write on....  |
Date: 9/23/2001 7:38:00 PM
From Authorid: 33922
Excellent!...Great job sweetie...I Luv ya...Stay as sweet as you are  |
Date: 9/24/2001 12:17:00 AM
From Authorid: 12581
Awww this is gorgeous, has a beautiful rythm and raw emotions. I think we have all felt this way one time or another! Please write on, your a wonderful poet Take care!  |
Date: 9/24/2001 8:13:00 AM
From Authorid: 36487
So sad, I could feel these words. Please keep writing E2, your very good  |
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Date: 9/28/2001 6:23:00 AM
From Authorid: 3648
This is so sad...a lot of raw emotions running threw each word.....it has the right flow to it. Another good poem Enchantress....  |
Date: 10/13/2001 10:54:00 PM
From Authorid: 31255
Trusting someone can be painfully hard to do. I personally am not one to trust people very easily. Although, I do try hard at times to push myself against the barriers that I often feel I am being faced with. But e2 don't give up trying to be someone's friend because they have hard time trusting, their friendship is often worth it. Not only will you have their arms stretched out towards you to but you will also have locked space in their heart This poem is very saddening to me  but well written You have an amazing talent for writing.  |
Date: 10/20/2001 8:54:00 AM
From Authorid: 39107
Great poem,thanks for sharing  |
Date: 10/20/2001 12:58:00 PM
From Authorid: 30401
you are very talented. this poem is really good! Love,  |
Date: 11/4/2001 12:36:00 PM
From Authorid: 18870
awwww how sad, but a beautifully written poem..I love you Auntie E2 *hugs*  |
Date: 11/27/2001 8:13:00 PM
From Authorid: 36965
This was WONDERFUL! I cant believe the talent you have..KEEP WRITING! Much love and blessings *hugs*,  |
Date: 2/4/2002 10:24:00 AM
From Authorid: 3642
WOw .......Too This I can relate somtimes I Think people get so busy or self absorbed They dont realize that some one needs Them .....or a kind word That can make all The diffrents ...that only That person can provide .....To be honest I Guess I have been On both sides of This One ......some Times I am so Busy people Think I am neglective On purpose and Then I feel guilt I Have over active Guilt glands .....I just hope with all My heart God helps me hear the wee small voice That needs a Hug   |
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Date: 1/6/2004 3:05:00 PM
From Authorid: 18870
awww thats a sad poem. I think there are a lot of people who lose friendships because they can't trust the person and the sad part is, that it is almost hard to trust anyone now a days... |
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36956 Category:(Poetry) Created:(9/23/2001 3:58:00 PM)