Date: 8/13/2001 6:27:00 PM
From Authorid: 38989
wow. i certinly know what that feels like ~Forgotten Colorz~  |
Date: 8/13/2001 6:27:00 PM
From Authorid: 35042
BABYG that is such a sad poem, and I really hope that things are ok with you... *hugs* Time will ease all   |
Date: 8/13/2001 6:28:00 PM
From Authorid: 35853
DEEP! Have a nice day!... "Dang!"  |
Date: 8/13/2001 6:31:00 PM
From Authorid: 8817
cute poems your rhyme schemes don't match though they are different for each stanza  |
Date: 8/13/2001 7:04:00 PM
From Authorid: 28336
i loved this poem....this is something i have felt everyday of my life...thank you so much for writing this....  |
Date: 9/5/2001 1:53:00 AM
From Authorid: 13869
GOOD POEM, IT HAS MEANING TO IT, KEEP WRITTING........lost soul
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Date: 5/13/2003 3:18:00 PM
From Authorid: 62140
Great use of words! Great poem! It's tight! Keep writing!!!!! All your poems I seem to relate to it! ~*CoCo*~  |
Date: 5/13/2003 7:08:00 PM
From Authorid: 42568
WOW. I am amazed by your words here. Love can feel so true, but then within a day, it could be lost or never actually real. It's so hard to really understand "why." We can be so blinded at times by love that "love" is more of a scary emotion to have than pleasurable. What a great read - I've experienced this as well.  |
Date: 11/6/2007 9:16:00 AM
From Authorid: 21433
i like this one as well
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