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Hidden From Sight, part 1. Silverhour

  Author:  5353  Category:(Fiction) Created:(6/14/2001 11:48:00 AM)
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Ever wonder what happened to those people who simply vanished? I'm not talking about the run-aways and the unidentified bodies dumped in the back woods. I mean the doctors, happy homemakers, top students, that don't show up for dinner one night, and are never heard from again. Well, that was me.

My first indication that something wasn't right was the man standing on the side of the road, he seemed so out of place I just had to stop and stare. Like something out of a Bram Stoker's novel, he was pale, dark haired, wearing a long black cloak, the whole vamped out look. Really creepy. Even creepier was when he turned and looked straight at me. There was a sort of shimmer around him, and being the self-conscience teen I was I looked down at myself to see if anything was wrong, and noticed the same shimmering sparkle outlining my body. I've come to realize that my life really began on that day.

"Alright, what have you done to me?"

He just smiled and walked away, falling in step with the crowd that passed. Aroggent little.... grrr. How I wanted to just drop him on his head from a tall building. As the image flashed through my mind I could hear his echoing laughter. Apperently he thought the idea was funny.

The tingle on the back of my neck tells me someone is looking at me, turning I search the crowds for the tell-tale shimmer, but I don't see one. I stare into the sea of people, their faces beginning to flash by in a blur, like everything is speeding up. A wave of nausea hits me and I stumble against a booth, knocking over a garbage can as the ground comes up at me. As the world goes black I realize people are coming to my aid....

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Date: 6/14/2001 12:00:00 PM  From Authorid: 3688    ohhhh freaky darling i cant wait to read more!!!!!!  
Date: 6/14/2001 12:38:00 PM  From Authorid: 36511    wow cool....good story. thanks for sharing that. cant wait till the next story.--wolf girl howlerz  
Date: 6/14/2001 3:09:00 PM  From Authorid: 17417    SilverHour,This is Fantastic BUT I've one question,How Long will Chapter 2 be "Hidden From Site"...You have a remarkable imagination and I want to Thank You for messaging me as I asked...I really enjoy the Cliff Hanger Way, in which you present your work and I am so looking forward to the next message which will lead me to The 2nd. Chapter...Thank You for sharing your Work and Talent with us ALL...I Remain An Admirer In Spirit,  
Date: 6/14/2001 9:45:00 PM  From Authorid: 1432    This definatly has my attention.. I like reading stuff like this.. I hope you post more.. and quick!! ..  
Date: 6/29/2001 12:23:00 AM  From Authorid: 21435    Hello SilverHour. Great start. Heading for partII. Thanks for the words. Write on...  

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