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Hidden from Sight (introduction)... Silverhour

  Author:  5353  Category:(Fiction) Created:(5/19/2001 2:01:00 AM)
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He stood in the shadows, watching the crowd as they walked by. "Pathetic," his thoughts drift out, "these cattle, drawn yearly to this festival of lights. Always the same drivel; sugar spun into fluffy clouds, corn toasted and tossed in melted fat, little ones darting along with globes of rubber floating above them, following there every move with strings attached to their wrists..." I just grin and nod, knowing he isn't serious. He steps into the crowd, every movement deliberate, paced and timed just perfectly so as to not interrupt the mindless flow of bodies.

I stood back and watched him, marvelling at his prowess. How easily he turns their minds eye away from him... I only hope to be half as good as him some day. For now, I am content to watch as he makes the journey across the broadway seem effortless. The bike that narrowly misses him, causing his cloak to flutter in it's wake, not even knowing of it's existence. At the far side he turns, and nods in my direction, "You're turn, m'lady" he grins. Bowing in mock politeness I step into the crowd, jumping back immediatly as the pedestrians close in on me. "Not funny..." I shoot back at him, his laughter still echoing in my mind.

"Ah my dear, how quickly you forget your pacing."

"Yeah yeah, bite me" I flash him back, taking even breaths, watching the oncoming traffic, counting the steps, gauging the distance. Now...two...three, step, step, pause...two...step...now...wait... The crowd starts moving in the opposite direction, drawing my attention to the other side. Step, pause, move, sidestep, move, pause...two...three... step, step, step...

"There, that wasn't so hard, was it?" The mocking grin begging to be forcebly removed. Of course, I'm not strong enough to physically touch him... yet... but it's always nice to imagine.

"Soon you will be able to do that without the awkward pauses and hesitant movements, passing unseen is easy, as you know, passing unnoticed is something entirely different."

Again the phrase "Bite me" flickers through my mind. Luckly he's in good humor today... I wouldn't have been born, if he wasn't, or so he would have me believe. I don't think he's quite that powerful... again, yet.

"Well child, you seem rather spirited today, perhaps a test of your abilities is in order, perhaps you will learn some humility."

"Or perhaps I may just suprise you."

"Indeed... we will see, won't we?"

And with that, everything changed...

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Date: 5/19/2001 2:06:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 5353    So nice to be back writing again. Giving my previous series a slight pause (AKA I've run out of juice on it and wanted to start something different).  
Date: 5/19/2001 5:38:00 AM  From Authorid: 3688    ok honey...you've started a new story...and didn't tell me......*sniff* what's up with that? good opening though **kisses and hugs** i want more....now :P  
Date: 5/19/2001 5:59:00 AM  From Authorid: 17417    OMG This is Fantastic you are so Talented, where is the next Chapter...I love the way you write,the flow is Excellent, I bookmarked this from chat because things have a tendancy to move off the page so quickly and I am soooo glad I did...Please message me when you write the next Chapter so I don't miss it...This is remarkably well written and I don't want to miss any of it...Don't forget to message me,PLEASE!!!Author ID 17417...Thank you for sharing this with us...Impatiently,Waiting for Next Chapter...I Remain In Spirit,  
Date: 5/19/2001 6:42:00 AM  From Authorid: 18103    This was really good work SilverHour. I am very intrigued and ready for the next chapter in this story. Keep 'em coming. I like how easily your story comes together.  

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