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I need help(THIS IS FOR ANYONE WHO CAN HELP ME!)

  Author: 30050  Category:(General Advice) Created:(4/25/2001 8:40:00 PM)
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Hi this is author Id#30050 Ok,I need a poem about a young boy he's in his teens. He goes to one of the groups at the counseling center I attend Ok he told us in group that he wasn't going to stop using POT(Mary-Jane) so our counselors decided to have a mock funeral for this young man because anyone who uses and don't quit will ultimately Die one way or the other(suicide,over dosing or so on).Ok it needs to be a poem about drugs and a teenage boy some how. And seeing that I have read so many of your poems on this site and they reveal so much feeling and a part of the heart of the poet Ineed it by 4/28/01 Greatly Appreciated LOL POUTWRP Author Id# 30050

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Date: 4/25/2001 8:43:00 PM  From Authorid: 15157    Good luck in this endevour.......GodBless  
Date: 4/25/2001 9:16:00 PM  From Authorid: 21137    OKay, I'll repost this in poetry so you can see how I laid it out.. I dunno how good it is, because I just wrote it but:The day they told me.
I still remember the day that they told me
You would not be back.
I remember wanting someone to hold me.

You were my friend,
in my sacred circle
untill the end.

And now your gone
Leaving us behind.
It's so hard to go on
With you still on our minds.

We asked you to stop
Told you it would kill you,
But you were on top
And there was nothing we could do.

The rancid odors that clung
to your clothes, or the way
your shoulders slumped and your head hung
Are in my mind to stay.

A dull smile, bloodshot eyes
Rolling laughter, memeries
Long alibies
these are what you left for me.

And I wonder, was it worth it?
The price we have to pay,
That 'one more hit'?

You could of been someone
College, marrige and children
But now your gone.

I don't know.
A lesson is learned
And I'll still grow.

But you won't.
I want to see you walk through the door
But you don't.

It doesn't matter how you died:
Gunfight, overdose, botched robbery.
All that matters is I cried
The day they told me. I hope this helps!
  
Date: 4/25/2001 9:56:00 PM  From Authorid: 30527    Dear Author; Please do not take offence at my comment, but rather try to understand. I understand clearly what you have requested, and why, but my goal is to help someone who may need my help. Although I could compose a poem on virtually any subject, I do not feel it proper to compose a poem for the reasons which you have requested. I do not agree with the "mock funeral" idea. To make fun of, or to stage a persons death, even to make a point, is in my viewpoint, disrespectful. I agree with trying to get this person to change his behavior, but the method which has been selected is in poor taste. For those reasons, I will not write the poem which you have requested, but rather offer you one which will serve to encourage him to value his life, rather than to mae light of his situation. I hope that you will understand my feelings on this. I will post my poem under poetry, for all USM users, but you are free to use it to help your friend, should you approve of it. The poem is entitled, " My Life Doth Slip Away". Good Luck with your friend,........ High Speed  
Date: 4/26/2001 4:41:00 PM  From Authorid: 30786    I respect your opinions, but I do not believe that marijuana users will all die terrible deaths. I know many that live constructive, positive lives. You cannot change this young man unless he wants to change  
Date: 4/26/2001 6:37:00 PM  From Authorid: 11749    Hmmm... I don't know if I can help ya on this one! But I think it's awesome that you care! ~CaitieAnje;l  
Date: 4/26/2001 8:15:00 PM  From Authorid: 12103    i cant help you with this poem or whatever you are talking about..but i just want to say, not everyone using pot will die one day..how can you say such a comment..WE WILL ALL DIE ONE DAY!! lol alot of people who smoke it live normal lives and you wouldnt even know it..its not just high school teenages...even though alot of them do...and dont think that i have smoked it before and standing up for thoes people because i havent smoked it, im terribley against it..it messes you up, in a gradual process....  
Date: 4/26/2001 8:52:00 PM  From Authorid: 21137    =)~ I just wanted you to know, I think what you're doing is right. When I was 16 I dated a guy who smoked pot. It wasn't really an occasional thing, but pot and booze where all he did. He was older and we eventually broke up. Without realizing we were related he met my sister in a bar one night, and they hooked up. Eventaully smoking pot couldn't get him high enough (you become accustomed to the stupid feelin in your brain) and Keith moved on to other drugs. One night he shared a needle with a guy who had Hepatitis C. Now, the father of my niece and nephew is rotting from the inside out. You can't stand to hugg him because he stinks of rotten trash - even after he takes a shower and brushes his teeth. He has 5 months to live. Not everyone who uses pot is going to wind up like that, but it is SO unfair that my 1 year old niece with have to grow up without a Daddy. It isn't really worth the chance, is it?  
Date: 4/26/2001 8:54:00 PM  From Authorid: 21137    P.s. I wanted to let you know that Keith was a straight A student, got scholarships to college, very good looking, and at 19 had a job making $25/hour. He wasn't a looser, or a loner when I met him. He was always dragging around tons of friends, (all hotties! LMAO). He just couldn't find a stopping point.  
Date: 4/27/2001 3:04:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 30050    Author Id#21137 I did not mean Pot is going to
kill everybody and I really think you understood
the point Alcohol and Pot are what they call a gateway Drug. You start out small(beer) then you
sooner or later want something stronger(pot)
then like your sister's husband you move on to
something even stronger(meth,coke,heroion!)
Thank you for the understanding This is POUTWRP

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