Date: 2/11/2001 8:09:00 PM
From Authorid: 18516
Aww how sad but yet a powerful poem.  Lemon  |
Date: 2/11/2001 8:28:00 PM
From Authorid: 26722
Really good poem. u have great talnet.
twisted_angel
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Date: 2/11/2001 11:38:00 PM
From Authorid: 17156
Ok now I'm really sad! This was so powerful and says a lot. Other than that I'm at a great loss of words, I wish I could say more. Love,  |
Date: 2/12/2001 12:29:00 AM
From Authorid: 16671
great poem son, I loved it and I feel your heart. love mom.  |
Date: 2/12/2001 1:40:00 AM
From Authorid: 21867
Yo DemonSlayer,
Powerful poem dude. I can so relate to that one. Many times I have watched as ladies I know have been trashed my men in their life. And you just wanna take those guys outside and 'discuss' it with them...don't ya, LOL! Great poem dude. Peace, AGENT SMITH  |
Date: 2/12/2001 6:24:00 AM
From Authorid: 12239
Lemon took the words right out of my mouth.Indeed a very sad but powerful poem.Very well written.
Full of depth and reflection.  |
Date: 2/12/2001 2:36:00 PM
From Authorid: 10657
wow demon very well written  |
Date: 2/12/2001 8:52:00 PM
From Authorid: 17560
I feel your frustration and only wishing you the best. Wonderful job also on your poem.  |
Date: 2/13/2001 11:44:00 AM
From Authorid: 13138
Great job, Dave. This is a very, very sad situation. Have faith and in the end it will all work out. ~grace~  |
19332 Category:(Poetry) Created:(2/11/2001 8:03:00 PM)