Date: 6/20/2010 8:13:00 AM
From Authorid: 63026
I like #2   |
Date: 6/20/2010 8:30:00 AM
From Authorid: 63041
Number 2 expresses more I think. But remember, whichever version says what YOU want to say more, is what matters most!  |
Date: 6/20/2010 8:32:00 AM
From Authorid: 34078
definitely 2  |
Date: 6/20/2010 10:31:00 AM
From Authorid: 998
I know that I was on the fence yesterday and couldn't make a decision on your two choices, but today is overwhelmingly #2.
I can see your pain, and it almost seems unfair that a guy who must have seemed like Mr. Right, could cause you so much heartache  I hope you can find a way to move past this and find the real Mr. Right. Your an awesome person, and deserve more !!!  |
Date: 7/6/2010 10:26:00 AM
From Authorid: 11097
I like both and think you could make one great poem combining the two. Good writing and I can feel the words, keep writing!  |
43807 Category:(Poetry) Created:(6/20/2010 5:01:00 AM)