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Date: 2/12/2008 9:29:00 PM
From Authorid: 4995
Oh wow..I LOVED this! From the perfect flow of the words to the very idea of how inside we are all the same. Wonderful piece. Do write more for us..  |
Date: 2/13/2008 12:50:00 AM
From Authorid: 51393
Very nice touching i love the way you bounce from negative to positive.This is life and it will always be.No one is perfect we all make mistakes.Somehow letting it go will be the hardest part forgiving thyself and forgiving others as well.Thank you for posting!  |
Date: 2/13/2008 7:01:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 64501
thanks for reading. big smiles everyone.  |
Date: 2/13/2008 1:23:00 PM
From Authorid: 21435
Most excellant words, Wicked Plantz. Thanks for sharing and Write on....  |
Date: 2/22/2008 7:49:00 PM
From Authorid: 63041
Well, you had to know that I would take the time to visit some of your other poetry right? lol. And so I begin the jouney along the poetic path of Wicked Plantz. I have to say that I really like the message here. The ping pong ball of good and bad accurately depicts how society makes so many feel most days. And the final lines... yes... we are all the same regardless of the packaging we were born with. Fantastic write. *runs off to read more Wickedness*  |
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