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News at Ten ....RM ETexas

  Author:  35531  Category:(Fiction) Created:(10/14/2007 7:29:00 PM)
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Prologue

“Forgive me Father for I have sinned,” the contrite whispered words echoed through the confessional wall. Father Delaney looked toward the latticed grating trying to focus on the penitent but only saw the dark hood of a kneeling silhouette. “How long has it been since your last confession?”

“Breathing the words voicelessly, “I have never confessed until now.”

Father Delaney spoke with reluctance, “Please acknowledge your sins.”

“I felt life leave her body. That is when I realized the finality of death. I became nauseated, my mind began to cloud, and then… I became lost. Lost in a place that I cannot escape. I know I will kill again.”

Shocked by the confession, there was a brief moment of silence before Father Delaney could continue. “I hear sorrow, helplessness, and a desire to repent in your voice but I have to ask; what sacramental penance can I advise if you intend to kill again? Your reparation, turn yourself in to authorities.”

The confessional box became silent as a tomb for an instant then heavy sobbing and short gasps for breath followed. Suddenly, before the Priest had chance for giving absolution and dismissal, the penitent rose, hurried out the church, and vanished. Father Delaney sat, motionless until the slamming of the exit door jolted his body to recovery.



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Date: 10/14/2007 7:50:00 PM  From Authorid: 56359    I enjoy the way you write your dialog. I’d like to see more of this story. Great start, and wonderful writing.  
Date: 10/14/2007 7:51:00 PM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 35531    thank you so much for the encouragement. This is a current project, mystery novel I am submitting to St. Martins Press  
Date: 10/14/2007 10:36:00 PM  From Authorid: 21435    What a fix to be in! Well done, RM. Thanks for the words and Write on.....  
Date: 10/15/2007 3:31:00 AM  From Authorid: 26203    Wow great piece...looking forward to reading more of your work...  
Date: 10/15/2007 9:28:00 AM  From Authorid: 53284    Great start. You might put in a few paragraphs to make it a little easier for people to read. But That really really grabbed me.  
Date: 10/15/2007 10:06:00 AM  ( From Author ) From Authorid: 35531    thanks guys, and thanks for the suggestion for reading effect.

Best regards
Robert Meacham
  

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